This is that shit you can't take you pussy/
get in my face and get straight baked like cookies/
You just some skanks I out rank, Ya'll rookies/
Ya rhymes wack, lookin back, sayin that boy shook~me/
Look in a book if ya need a hook, get~that~shit/
Ya need some nook find some puss, n hit~that~shit/
Ya want weed, got what you need, just come 2 da crib/
Try 2 jack me bitch I got heat and I will make you strip/
I'll probably take ya whip, n take a trip, head ova 2 Cali./
2 the ground Ima strip it down, n leave ya ride in a alley/
See I get blowed by these hoes kinda like a windmill/
Ya shits old, my shits cold, thats b-cuz I been~real/
Ya rhymes R bloopers~man, they call me superman, cuz I bend~steal/
Bitch whats happenin, Its straight platinum, grill and the gems~real/
My friends~kill, ya ends~will, turn up in my pockets/
Blow out ya brains, snatch ya chain, n ya rolex watches/
Ex, Smack, Coke, Crack, man I done sold that patna/
2 the bottom of the map, Ima bring it back, cuz I only roll on choppas/



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Uppin fa feedback in this bitch!!!!!!

its straight killa... nothin special but not to bad homie... keep elevating

yea it aint too bad.......a lil bit of lyricism noted, but the content/topic is played tho, done heard it, id say when spittin on ish like this, u can keep it real but also keep it clever...its clever but nothin that made me go ooo shyt thats on point......

holla acha boi man

I want to stab my eyeballs out with a blunt knife.

personally I dont see how this is keeping it real at all. He had no topic or concept...this belongs in a very degraded or dead cypher from like 3 years ago.

please....kill yourself....that is all

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Fuck both you haters!!!!! Any1 else got something to say about it.

no good i've heard it like 70 thousand times.

sorry bro but your rhymes are pretty good.

first off im gonna start off wit the positive cuz every person deserves ta hear both the good and the bad bout their music. your flow was good i felt like it could go to a beat and it went together very good. ur lyrics were beyond basic but werent all oohs and ahhs lol so work on that a lil more but overall ur lyrics were decent. now for the kinda down part bout it. u gotta make people FEEL and RELATE to ur music u cant just be like "muthafucka ima blow you away im a gangsta u hoes just gay" cuz first off gangsta music is straight up played out, no creativity, and is just shit people dont wanna really hear. i feel like u can be realer get in touch with ur true emotions. anyways this was decent so keep dropping just work on what you got to say and make sure u always got links in every drop

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oh and RTF on my open mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239397 do it or i'll close ur shit muhahahahaha lol j/p

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