g. i never said ur verse didnt flow, i was just explaing how it is different.

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ya crews whack dude,..ya suck n don't hate when I kill cowards
so when I break the bridge of ya rap,..the one in London will cower
^ London is only popular because of that kid song "London Bridges Fallen Down". You've misused this punch, or at least, didn't use it to it's fullest extent.
originality?..name sucks n is whack, so I'll leave these gays blazed
cuz use Gap,n ya original name is nothin more than a played phrase
^ Basic and lame.. who cares about how old 'G' is?
lol..to easy, ya mom sucks ma dick so simply she gives this vet dome
cuz cowhide aint a material,..its what I tell his mom when G gets home
^ okay.[b]
you got no skill..but alot of posts, so I guess thats your sole curse
ya didnt' make the deadline,..< n that plural sum's up ya whole verse!
[b]^ So played you could call it a bite.
ya need to rethink battlin,..I can tell ya ain't gettin better from ya game
cuz u coudlnt' be 'ill'...if ya removed the rest of the letters from ya name!
^ Also basic and lame..

vs.

Lay Fear your not richboy he's hated more then a snitch...
So wit' ya name you might as well throw a d in dat bitch... LaDy Fear!
^ Hell no.
...Your perfect record on RapVerse you just blown it...
Ya gettin owned kid...
Lay Fear the only thing you run is away from your opponents...
^ Played and gay
I'll twist up your name...
Leavin' voters laf 4 yearz...
...you just have a small buzz like half a beer...
^ ............................ do I need to explain?
Talk about me not bein' ill?.. homie this is pure game...
Your lame, the letter L is the only thing truthful in ya name...
Lame
This meals begun...Lay steals for fun...
Above me the 8 Mile Quote the only thing clever he wrote...
I got steal lungz, so verse this herb I will never choke...
:O u so dope lar
Ima end your shit, He's weak when he SENs a hit,
Got Lay like mighty duck, then I might win the championship...
Nope.
I'm lappin' him quick....
And he's lays so you know ima eat more then one...
Even in a car race...
A punch fear could never fourmula one...
Roflmfao. And not in a good way.

Vote - GKillazz.

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I fucked up the vote somewhere in there but eh who gives a fuck. I was honest. But I think Gkillaz may have done more lines. like 4 more or something. maybe 2.

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