Aight. you know the rules.

10-15 lines

no d/r, crew, hate, unexplained, or bullshit votes

ill spit in an hour or so. sry

haha diz mah homie lil phresh so u kno i gotta c dis hahahahahhahaha i think he gunna win he betta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fuk It.. Just Match My Barz

Quick Key...

Phresh Is Under Par, Cuz Like Ya Battle Verse Wuz Aluminum Jailz Young'll Fold-Ya-Barz
Scold-Ya-By-Far, Hookin Country Gurlz Up With Me Is The Only Time U A Sue-Per-Star
I'll Curb-Ya-Thrillz, N Spit Wordz-To-Kill, Using Verbs-Wit-Skillz, Young'll Serve-Ya-Still
Never Heard-U-Real, U Meetin Death N U Don't Know Wut To Do Like I Burned-Ya-Will
Earned-Ya-Label, Its Ya Turn-Ya-Able? Ya Recieving Hard Lines Like I Returned-Ya-Cable
Burn-Ya-Ables! Like Armless DJ's In A Furniture Store Phresh Just Can't Turn-Da-Tables
Seduced-N-Wrecked, Bruised-N-Wrecked, Like Being Defeated In Ya Prime Phresh Will Lose-At-Best
Reduced-N-Stressed, View-Ya-Text! I'll Win Wit Ease!! Like Awol Teachers U Don't Produce-A-Test

Uppin For Phresh

nice... heres mine:

little man claiming he be an allstar/10
bitch, im better at this shit by-far/9
my dog PiMpiNTaY has my back/8
i smack ya in da face and make u wack/9
i didnt understand a fucking thing u said/12
sounded as stupid as P.T. said my mom gave'em head/13
all that shiz bout sue-per-star and shit/8
why dont u hand me ur pink slip and quit/10
my punches come fast and hard/7
ill dump u like a bankrupt credit card/9

nice closer, everything else was kinda crappy, and please vote on my other battle against PiMpiNTaY080. P'z

ya if i could vote i gotta give it to mah man Lil Phresh

ya patna thx 4 includin me lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

yea. the polls are uppin. please vote. i dont it to be a sleeper like me and PiMpiNTaY080's battle. vote on that one too.

thats some weak shit man............

neither really were anywhere near a good standard......

Lil Phresh - y do u diss ur own mother in ur verse? thats jus idiotic......

both had nasty structures.......... wot were the numbers meant to be at the end of ur lines Phresh?!?!
if they r meant to be line numbers....u need to learn to count!!

young had sum very played lines..... but he still won cuz Phresh dissed his own mother.... WHAT THE FUCK..... still got me confused man!

vote - Young

no hate.....

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i wasnt dissin my mom. PiMpiNTaY080 said that my mom gave him head and i said that was as wack as the shit YA said. and the numbers were how many syllables were in that sentence.

aight. its 1-0 YA. keep the votes coming. i have another battle that needs voted too. so please vote for it as well.

u should have put the link in here phresh
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yea. but oh well. its still cool. im hoping my battle with pt and this one close so i can see if i won or not

Woah
One sided battle in my opinion, and Allstar took it. Just better concepts / punches and an all round better verse, i suggest now bolding the multi's and making your lines shorter but yeah, you got this one pretty easily.

Vote - allstar

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W o r d P e r f e c t

Vote= Allstar.

Really one sided battle as i said before. no offense, lil phresh u need to come a bit harder though


vote here plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100210