10 lines
we both write at the same time
then we post our verses within 10 miutes
after we both check in
thats how its done here

check in

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im goin out to get drunk.,.....if theres a caomputer there......i'll post....if not.....i'll post tommorow you can wait if u'd like sorry bro....rides out front...............

key tommorow if you want.....

oeace

why the fuck im battlin a cottonmouth.....(nigga-wit-no-spit)//
you could eat a pound of dro, and still couldnt drop no dope shit//
im just anotha miss on ya hitlist, cause you aint seein me//
ya chances is hopeless, my punches stick like glue, like sean p//
i flow elegantly, cause i let the grace of God get me//
watch me dog niggas out, u a bitch come sleep wit me//
shawty cant hang wit me, cause im bout to give a castration//
chop ya like timber, dump ya carcass in a lake, just ask jason//
i stack bricks like masons, im like a block wall son//
if you trying to get a losing record, u just made the conversion//

shit folk, u a motherfuckin lie, pussy out like a got damn ho, wtf this nigga thank? he be back in bout an hour wit a damn revised verse....................................fuck this pussy. u said ten minutes i took twelve so i think i should get this motherfuckin battle. yall drop them damn votes so i can go head and beat this no show........

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin..................... .................................................. .................................................. .....................

if yall vote on this i will hit your battle up.......just post a link...............................

conversion drop ya verse asap nigga, get meeeeeeeeeeerkkkkked up................................................ .................................................. ......................................

yo just got home......i'll key up now.................
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I had to bounce cuz gettin drunk's more important than dissin you
Even wit ya face on milk carton's my punches still aint missin you
Damn son...............ta have 8 wins you gotta be packin some skill
You aint smilin' in ya sig cuz i know the teeth are lackin' in ya grill
kuntyboi, i sunk his poise, shut ya mouth closed like'a trunk'a toys
Fuck some noise, it's more like I Pastor ruckus leave you stuck in Troy
U from Georgia, damn, it's a shame you can't be reppin' Atlanta
In your mind you think you spit sick so you took some Mylanta
You couldnt beat me if I layed down and I gave you the bat
Starvin ta be street so C hadda show you pavement ta back
Fade'em ta black

upppn some shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

hmmmm....
Punches were weak
Personals were lacked
Flow was good
Structure was decent
Wordplay was weak
OVeral....12/20






Flow was pretty good
Punches were decently hard hitting
Vocab... not much...
Personals.... lacked...
Overall......14/20

Vote-Conversion...
I simply thought he came harder..
Punches hit a bit harder .....

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