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05-26-04, 05:02 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
oh aight...HEy you even said it your self...So stop tryin to play people..You said it yourself and They were stretched and let me stop its too many free postin in this thread..Sorry..But yea..They where stretched...No hate
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05-26-04, 05:13 PM
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IP: 9FFB EC06
lol...i sed i wusnt sure....but yea no hate....good verse mayn and good luck
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05-26-04, 05:28 PM
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IP: 970D 9C87
stop with all this bullshit so much got damn freepostin imma vote
Lx your shit was aiight but its still a little 4th gradish you need to up your vocab and I HATED your closer it was garbage..your verse was aiight they didnt all flow well together but you kept it together and your shit wasnt stretched i think you had 1 or 2 (pretty nice) lines but none of them made me go (OHH) so your verse was ok 30/50 Potential: you had good wordplay your structure was bad it was allllll sstretched but you had good flow..try to shorten up your lines it makes your verse look better more organised and makes it easier to read...i was feelin the verse doe you had good multi's and punches and you killed him with the wordplay and you kept it consistant you didnt fall off..nice 37/50 i give my vote to potential
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05-26-04, 07:04 PM
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Yea I would give it to Potential..You beat me LOL..Couldt really think...Nice spit aight...I know ya probably got me
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05-26-04, 09:51 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
aight...
X - wow...that was the worst drop ive ever seen by you...all ur lines were stretched...no good punches...all were just elementary....need to elevate ur wordplay....use better meta's.....use personals.....weak verse....i give it a 3.6/10.....elevate man..... potential - well u had better vocabulary....ur lines were stretched but not as bad as his....more complexity to ur verse....dont use "" around ur werds....better punches....u had a couple personals.....u easily took this wit that wack verse by X.....keep elevatin kid.... vote - potential both need to elevate....
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05-26-04, 09:52 PM
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P 3 - 0
Potential's IN...
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05-26-04, 09:53 PM
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ok L.I. his is stretched not mine..LOL Seems like you didnt even read the verses..LOL becuz if you look all his lines went to the next line...But IDC Becuz I know hw won..I though he was going to be easy so I took it easy..Nice...Hope ya win potential
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