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Old 08-05-05, 09:48 PM   #1
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Tweety vs. Osiris

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Old 08-05-05, 09:53 PM   #2
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This is what I'm talking about.........Chezecking in.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
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Old 08-06-05, 11:28 AM   #3
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Finally just me and you Tweety...., nah where's the topic at?????
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Old 08-08-05, 07:28 PM   #4
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Cool, I've been granted with a extension till wednesday...Sorry in school Busy Busy Busy.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
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Old 08-09-05, 02:55 PM   #5
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"When your window of oppurtunity comes....what will you do?" - Tim Ingland

The hustle and bustle of city grittied my shufflin feet, Titties and muscles deplete my ego that clutters the street
Bubbly sheets of soapy water on washed cars, Some dumb bum mumblin of Christ and a lost cause
I *coughed* paused, halted at the rattle of a trashbin, Brain addled by the shadowed prattle of assassins
.. But damnit, I'm getting ahead of myself, All those sugary donuts can't be good for my health
A 6'5", big guy, who's wrist I, saw take a quick dive, Behind a dumpster once or twice, the glint, *bright*
Of a knife butt, the other guy jumped like Jehosaphat, Tha giant pawed his balls and stopped to stroke his sack
I could smell sweat and arousal, hell-bent in a town full, Of nig.gers and sp.icks, injuns and ch.inks, it's doubtfull
That if I pick a fight I'll live the night to tell a bit about it, So i lit a light, and spit a nice "It sounds a little crowded!"
The mean mugs of these thugs slumped to fealty, I smelled cock, shell shocked, they whispered "realty"
The smaller rat hollered that his daddy's a landlord, And since birth, he's been cursed with standing a sandstorm
Each brown speck contaminating the virtue, Of every bright lily white virgin they pursue
I caught the drift of his symbolism like an avalanche, That won't stand a nig.ger's magic stick, fuck a Bagger Vance
"Me and this muli, it's our duty for 50 cents, To do this unruly in mutilant increments"
How could I argue with that? But I was taken aback, My jaw had fallen to slack, cuz tha girl wasn't black?!
But on closer inspection, you could notice the tan, And the curves that disturb first, then focus a man
To commiting a sin which I'm forced to pardon, And I'm no nig.ger lover to exhort tha warden
About the injustices they percieve from the class, Of good clean white folks that love kickin' that ass
Why, just the other day a darkie spit on my shoes, He might have been shining 'em, but I still give him abuse
And these two, they're grown enough to know this 'girl' is just that, But in a year or two, I'll hear a few of those she cussed at
Complaining that black bitches make horrible hookers, Only good from the back, those fat, deplorable lookers
But this ..this child..eyes as blue as my wife's, Eyes that strike like my son's life..he's due on the 9th
And for a minute, I witnessed such an image of pain...She clutched at her vagina, tried to diminish the stain
On a new white skirt, now ripped and tattered..stripped and battered, as she limped and stammered
About how little Tommie needs a story to sleep..But..no. I've got alotta glory to reap.
So we shook hands, said "Look, man, jus go about your business" Turned around, ignored the sound, forgot what I had witnessed
The blood, and the skin and the tint of the scabs...Until I shrug..then I wince from the glint of my badge

*Police Record, 1952*

Sorry bout the structure ..but forgot it was only 30 line limit i had like 60...g'luck tweety you get to peep my verse first
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Old 08-11-05, 01:02 AM   #6
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Uh...Ohhhhhhh I see no verse and it thursday ...hmm
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Old 08-11-05, 03:43 PM   #7
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^^I get to Drop today.......Talked to Rev on aim

The ones who got extensions can drop today......Vato.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
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Old 08-11-05, 10:32 PM   #8
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Like an gentle flowing River; Tears course down my cheek Slowly
Just seeing her in this hospital bed makes my life very sorely
I can imagine hearing those screechy tires and her calling to god
Eyes Widden In Horror, when those head-lights came closer she saw
Just By thinking of it makes my heart-Ache in agony of Pain
I just can't let her go, I won't. There's gots to be a way to obtain
Then I remember the last Cold Hearted Words She Told Me
"Sorry, but I have to go as soon the last leaf falls from that tree"
Dark Lurking above me with stars. Brush and Paint bucket in hand
I refuse to let you go. I came up with an creative,a good fine plan
.
.
The Next Day,Sadden that Things hasn't change. I feel so weak
Pray for her, hoping that god won't take this person away from me
I remembered The Good Happiness Times that we lovingly shared
With that Firm body, and personality.her in my arms i had to bared
Loud "Flat" Beep noise Broke the Silence. The worse has come
I can see beneath her, soul shrinking and falling like September autom
Quickly Grasped her in my arms. "Please Look out the window"
Knee's quivering, Body getten numb. I feel Like I'm going hollow
Heart now in a smooth beat rhythm. *Sigh* .......Feel so Relieved
Happy because all because of that one leaf didnt fall from that tree
.
.
She Grasp ahold of my hand now. Making sure That she was there
I'll never forget that day, when she breathed again, taking out of despair
Looking both at each other eyes. To me she looks like an beautiful flower
"You may kiss the Bride", our lips showed passion. Wanting to hold her forever
This day I will not forget, Feeling so Happy about Jumping into a new era of love
She Looks Better than ever, Like a Sun-Flower in a dress looking like a dove
Getting Teary and now Heart-Broken but in a good way. I saved her...her Life
If it wasn't that Leaf I pained outsider her window..She would've never been my wife

G-Luck
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 08-12-05, 03:46 PM   #9
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Uppo............
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 08-13-05, 01:11 AM   #10
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Closed

Osiris is DQed for going over the line limit. Though you tried to hide it, it's still more then 30 lines. Tweety wins.
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