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Old 05-29-04, 11:24 AM   #1
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L.I. Vs Triple N

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10-20 lines.

Agree on an amount.
3-0 = KO
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Old 05-29-04, 11:47 AM   #2
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whats goood....this will be another nice battle.....checked in.....
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Old 05-30-04, 02:10 AM   #3
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checkin' in this mothafucka
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Old 06-02-04, 10:46 PM   #4
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Face it dogg your wack...People dont respect you and thats a fact...
Suggest you boycott rap...Ya name is the closest thing to being black...
Tired of you acting good and spittin herb lines...
Just walking into the battle your blown up like land mines...
Obviously im not tryin...i know you not gonna show...
So take advice in line doce and give that a go...
I'm going to bed cause u seriously arent worth a good verse...
Even if you did show you couldnt beat me..u'd still be worse...
Why go 10...im doing a keystyle just to move on in the game...
Only reason your crew slogan is 'countless' is cuz o wins stays the same...

LOL wow thats bad...i dont think he's showing....
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Old 06-02-04, 11:24 PM   #5
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This verse I call the many meanings of L.I.

This kid need to get out of here wit those PG raps, battlin' me wrong move
He don't throw punches, their "kix" cuz their "mother approved"
You can't make up for weak punches wit extended line length
"L"."I". must stand for "L"atose "I"ntolerant cuz ya punches have no strength
All ya topicals are weak, none of those fake wins should be kept
Cuz all your topicals do is prove that you are "L"yrically "I"nept
The fact that he likes to recycle he forgot to mention
Cuz all ya battles are reworded versions of ya "L"ast "I"nvention
I mean look at the bullshit he jus dropped does it get any bleaker
I guess L.I. also stands for "L"ost "I"ntensity cuz his verses been gettin weaker
Why'd u waste ya time dropping that garbage, u knew u couldn't win conviently
This battle has given L.I. a new meaning>"L"ost "I"ntentionally
You think u the king, when ya rhymes aren't oriniginal, they're clones
I heard your audios, an they had my ears ringing more than "telephones"
For you to even impersonate a real emcee, is a serious lyrical crime
U think ya spits are sick, I've heard better audios spit by "mimes"
This bitch posting beats when he can't even make a proper loop
He couldn't make a "Hot Beet" even if he deepfried the whole "vegetable group"

All I got to say is "NEXT!!!!!!!!"
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Old 06-03-04, 10:20 AM   #6
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You both missed EASTERN TIME AMERICAN TIME..... & thats not UK

but i`ll make an exstention since you both dropped.
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Old 06-03-04, 03:39 PM   #7
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^ no they didn't, not by my computer. Anyway I think that, sadly enough, LI took this. First of all, you guys should have agreed on a line length, but it was still gay of Triple N to go like twice as long as LI did. Triple N, your verse was nice in exactly two spots, where you sort of murdered nice concepts and wasted them with poor wording and lack of set up. The "hot beet" thing was nice, the "mime" is not too original but still nice. But your verse was so annoying with its 87 variations of LI, and none of them were even good. Like wtf does Lactose Intolerance have to do with lack of strength. Seriously man, I've seen you do much better.

LI, I don't know how long you spent on that, but its better than half the other stuff you do. A couple lines were weak and just filler, but you dissed his name pretty originally, dissed his crew slogan and overall had decent enough flow although still a bit stretched.

Sad to say, v/ LI
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Old 06-03-04, 08:59 PM   #8
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WTF?^^^^.....looks like he wants to face L.I...lmao
ummmm the break down.....

--------L.I.---------
L.I i like ur topicals and battles... but in this battle i wasnt feelin u one bit....u had some decent punches and wordplay and u had some good stucture...jus felt u could do a lil better....u started off wit a decent opener...it was ok jus wasnt feelin it....as ur versre kept goin i think u was gettin better...u should of kept on goin....then i like the way u dissed his crews slogan...simple but it worked....overall i'll give like a B- good vere homie

------Triple N-----
your opener ....i liked it was cool ...it was humerous wit the slogan for kix...mothers approved....lol...u had some good wordplay but ur stucture was somewhat off i think L.I took that catagory...u had some good punches....and i liked the different variations of L.I it was good but i think u kinda overdid it....other than that good verse...overall B
good job homie

----Final Thoughts---
I personaly think Triple N took this wit ok punches and some humerous lines.....although L.I stucture was better i still think his verse was the weaker one between the two...so imma give my vote to Triple N
 
Old 06-03-04, 10:04 PM   #9
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Face it dogg your wack...People dont respect you and thats a fact...
Suggest you boycott rap...Ya name is the closest thing to being black...
I THINK THATS FUCKIN GAY.....OH CUZ HE IS "N" ,HE WANTS TO BE BLACK?THATS RETARDED,HE NEVER TRIED ACTIN BLACK ON THIS BOARD...UNLIKE A SHITLOAD OF WIGGERS
Tired of you acting good and spittin herb lines...
Just walking into the battle your blown up like land mines...
OK,THATS THE MOST PLAYED OUT LINE I'VE SEEN THIS WEEK...THATS FROM 3 YRS AGO
Obviously im not tryin...i know you not gonna show...
So take advice in line doce and give that a go...
WEAK
I'm going to bed cause u seriously arent worth a good verse...
Even if you did show you couldnt beat me..u'd still be worse...
OK,THAT IS WHAT THEY CALL A FILLER LINE

Why go 10...im doing a keystyle just to move on in the game...
Only reason your crew slogan is 'countless' is cuz o wins stays the same...
THE WAY I'M INTERPRETING IT,COUNTLESS N WINS STAY THE SAME WOULD BE A COMPLIMENT.......I GUESS IT CAN BE A DISS/BUT IT CAN ALSO BE A COMPLIMENT SO ITS NOT A GOOD PUNCH......

OVERALL...HORRIBLE VERSE...U UNDERESTIMATED UR OPPONENT......

LOL wow thats bad...i dont think he's showing....



This kid need to get out of here wit those PG raps, battlin' me wrong move
He don't throw punches, their "kix" cuz their "mother approved"
LOL,I GET IT N I LIKE IT
You can't make up for weak punches wit extended line length
"L"."I". must stand for "L"atose "I"ntolerant cuz ya punches have no strength
UMM..I DONT LIKE IT
All ya topicals are weak, none of those fake wins should be kept
Cuz all your topicals do is prove that you are "L"yrically "I"nept
DONT LIKE IT
The fact that he likes to recycle he forgot to mention
Cuz all ya battles are reworded versions of ya "L"ast "I"nvention
I GET IT,N YES HE USES PLAYED LINES...BUT U OVER USED THE WHOLE L.I. THING...IT BECAME VERY GAY
I mean look at the bullshit he jus dropped does it get any bleaker
I guess L.I. also stands for "L"ost "I"ntensity cuz his verses been gettin weaker
HMMM...NO PUNCH THERE
Why'd u waste ya time dropping that garbage, u knew u couldn't win conviently
This battle has given L.I. a new meaning>"L"ost "I"ntentionally
LOST INTENTIONALLY IS FUNNY FOR L.I. BUT IT DOESNT RHYME WITH CONVENIENTLY.....N U DIDNT SPELL IT RIGHT
You think u the king, when ya rhymes aren't oriniginal, they're clones
I heard your audios, an they had my ears ringing more than "telephones"
ROFL@THIS...CUZ I HEARD HIS AUDIOS N HE HAS A VERY HIGH PITCHED ANNOYING VOICE.....SO TRUE
For you to even impersonate a real emcee, is a serious lyrical crime
U think ya spits are sick, I've heard better audios spit by "mimes"
GAY......MIME LINES ARE PLAYED
This bitch posting beats when he can't even make a proper loop
He couldn't make a "Hot Beet" even if he deepfried the whole "vegetable group"
LOL GOOD SHIT.........GOOD CLOSING....LI'S WAS GAY

WOW,CAN I SAY L.I. GOT HIS ASS KICKED.........
TRIPLE N HAD THE TELEPHONE LINE N THE BEET LINE THOSE WERE STRAIGHT N THE KIX LINE........L.I. HAD NO PUNCHES...........I THINK HE DROPPED THINKIN U WERENT GONNA SHOW.........HE HAD THAT REALLY PLAYED LAND MINES LINE,N U HAD THAT REALLY PLAYED MIME'S LINE............N U DEFINITELY OVERUSED L.I. THAT WAS JUST FUCKIN RETARDED......U DID MAKE UR LINES VERY LONG........BUT EITHER WAY.....U HAD 3 PUNCHES.......L.I. HAD NONE

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Old 06-04-04, 08:39 AM   #10
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Woah...

I thought L.I's verse was real weak... I dint like any single one of his lines & the land mine line was kinda played... You had a few punches other than that i was'nt feeling you verse...... Erm Triple N you're structure was fucked up and doing " fucks up your flows and proves u need to show punches which is herbish bu tthe first line i liked lolu denftly had better punches here and u had some funny lines... also i think L.I. undermestmated u
V/Triple N
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Old 06-04-04, 10:42 AM   #11
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This was a pretty horrible battle. L.I just dropped some shit to make sure he would show but Triple_N actually came hard. Triple's verse still kinda sucked but it was better than L.I's so I gotta give him my vote

Vote - Triple_N

L.I......I liked your closer and your opener......if you would have atleast tried in the middle, you would have won this.....
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Old 06-04-04, 12:27 PM   #12
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Isnt 4-1 a KO too?
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Old 06-04-04, 12:28 PM   #13
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no 3-0 is ko its up to 5 WHY DONT YOU VOTE and get it over and done with god damn.
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Old 06-04-04, 01:35 PM   #14
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name the closest thing to being black? Triple N..as in "n" for nigger?

lol...i hope that wasn't the meaning of that meta...u crew dawg, but that was horrible
 
Old 06-04-04, 02:47 PM   #15
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tripple N........felt that you came harf for once because i havent really seen you come hard in alot of your battles and shit......your punches hit hard and they stuck......didnt really like your structur though but your flow was still gud


LI.......what the hell was you thinking with this spit here man.......i didnt like your shit this time around......your punches didnt really hit that hard and they didnt stick at allll only thing that i would sya you had over N this time would be the structure.......e-z

v/Tripple
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