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Old 11-16-04, 01:57 PM   #1
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idh vs miss avy (text)

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check in by the 18th at 11:59 pm
drop verses by the 20th at 11:59 pm
14-20 lines
all votes must be explained
no tryin to sway votes
good luck to both of u
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Old 11-16-04, 08:32 PM   #2
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Checkin In G'luck..
 
Old 11-18-04, 09:52 AM   #3
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checking in..... and don't choke Idh
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Old 11-20-04, 10:44 PM   #4
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shit forgot bout dis battle... well then, here's a quick 18 lines

Ya daughter hoez? No wonder, ya look like the lost daughter of the KLUMPS
Are you a “Fit” contender? Prove it; you can’t battle as “high” as you can “JUMP!”
What? A Lady Lyricist? How is THAT possible, you DAUGHTER hoe after hoe?
Result: your slutty skillz are showing and it has overgrown your own SHADOW!
Good god, 0 and 2? May “God’s Blessings” please bless you, you’re pathetic
And I guess it’s true you’re a daughter hoe? Don’t get mad at me, you said it!
So you pound pussies… I bet you feel proud slut you want a reward?
Strip you of your pride cuz I’m cutting the “Daughter” off I-Hoez “Vocal Cords!”
Oh you want more? Are you that hungry? Your tummy gonna explode
You never accept a newcomer, that’s why it’s evident to the pussies you rode!
You’re slowed down hoe, damn frolic, u like your avatar, you down with alcoholics?
With your record I’d be sick to my stomach and ur skillz are “newborn” screaming “Colic!”
Why bother with this prick, she’s proof that hoes must continue to walk this earth
Wit a name like hers she proves she’s a pervert unless she was fucked at child birth!
For what it’s worth, you got skills whore but no it’s not at battling, you should quit
Don’t claim ya beat sum Latin Kitty up, your Asia(n)! Stick to eating rats in your shit!
I’m Slick as Rick bitch I don’t need to score brownie points…. You’re not a vet
All your lines are played! Quit frontin it’s about time you press the “RESET!!”


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Old 11-21-04, 07:38 AM   #5
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'You’re slowed down hoe, damn frolic, u like your avatar, you down with alcoholics?
With your record I’d be sick to my stomach and ur skillz are “newborn” screaming “Colic!”'

Too be honest, I didn't get the rest, but I thought this bar was pretty funny.

My vote goes to Avy, cus IDH choked and no showed.
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Old 11-21-04, 07:11 PM   #6
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^silence smut ya vote dont count...i gotta extension for my verse due tonight for me
 
Old 11-21-04, 08:19 PM   #7
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Foes have Witnessed me Son Dudes,i Seen ya Penis..Dont play Dumb!-
Im The Sickest N Front of You,Flip AVY backwords n Folks see Y-VA Ducked-
rip ya Arm out of the Socket,need a shoulder to cry on?..i'll hand u ya Limb-
Bitch is Harmed quick cuz i Dropped Sick,only a retard would be Fan of this bitch-
ya hopes Owned This Chick knows she'd only win if i No Showed-
You throwed ho,im steppin on stones..wait my bad! now u got broke bones-
Time to Delete letters,S-S-V-Y..and fuck what this Fems Rhymes say
Cuz from the line above This Cocky Bitch will Be Left M I A
Tearing this Pussy call it dry sex,check this chick spit trashy-
Time For a GoodBye Thread,But Face it no ones going to MISS Avy-


quick 10 lines fuck 18 not doin that many vote up -1-
 
Old 11-22-04, 12:57 AM   #8
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no hate at all, i respect you both, doin ya thing~
avy~you had some good lines, your concepts and vocab were good here, but your lines were mad strectched,you tried to say a lot, but couldnt fit it in your verse, which threw the flow off completely,your opener was ok, your verse got better as i read on,liked the pussies you rode line,,,good one,liked the baby colic lines, umm,your closer was ended this nicely, good job here..
IDH~nice name personals and wordplay with that concept, you had a tight verse here,but i feel that miss avy had more creative punches and disses in her verse,your vocab was good,but i also think avy used better vocab here as well,
hmmm, i know avy stretched her verse out,,,and IDH really didnt come off to me that strong....this was tough,,,but i'ma go with creative words here........avy on this...again,,honest,,no hate here...
VOTE~MISS AVY
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