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Old 04-06-07, 12:02 AM   #1
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Faime S. Quotez vs. Crazy Hadez vs. Irrational

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Preseason Match-up!

Faime S. Quotez vs Crazy Hadez vs Irrational

Ok, This is a preseason match-up. This battle will not be counted on your regular season record. This is just a battle to get things started up a little before the actual season starts, and we would like it if you could show, but if you can't just let us know in your thread.

Checks Due: Friday April 611:59 P.M. CST
Verses Due: Saturday April 7, 11:59 P.M. CST
Voting Ends: Sunday April 8, 11:59 P.M. CST

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Good Luck to Both!

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Old 04-06-07, 12:15 AM   #2
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Roses are red, violets are blue, I'll fuck you with a rake.

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Old 04-06-07, 11:12 AM   #3
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check check .

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Old 04-06-07, 07:42 PM   #4
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Checkin in. Good luck to both...
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Old 04-06-07, 09:50 PM   #5
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I'll just get this out the way now.

My topic is: "Crash"

There was a man named Peter N. George, who cheated and swore
your typical 36 year-old drunkie who didn't believe in the Lord
He has 2 kids: a girl and a boy, 1 in 4th grade and kindergarten
and a wife who stays at home, in charge of cleanin' and dinner startin
The family used to go to church, but since Peter refused it forever
every Sunday, they just stayed at home doing whatever
But the wife and kids loved church, and they wanted to get to it bad
so they'd sneak to church saying, "We're going to visit my Dad!"
Every Sunday, a different escuse, Peter gave a look all strange
but he stayed home, drinkin' his beer, watchin the Football Game
Then, he thought, "Hmm.. they visit Dad TOO much.. hell, it's true
but he IS my father-in-law.. I guess I'll visit.. I ain't got shit else to do."
So Peter went to the hospital where his father-in-law was
he found his room, came in and started givin his father-in-law hugs
He didn't see his wife and kids, so he asked "was my wife and kids here?"
his father-in-law replied, "What?... I ain't seen them in 6 years!"
Peter froze.. started puttin the pieces together, he turned one way
and realized they lied to him to go to church every Sunday!
So he left the hospital and parked at church, and waited
he saw them come out, and hurried home to be there before they did
Peter didn't like them going, so he got home, plottin' to find
a plan to make them get church off of their minds
So when they got home, he called them in the living room to take a sit
and cried, "Pack your bags, because we're taking a vacation trip!"
They all were excited, and started packin' cause they were next to go
on a long, fun trip to spend days in Mexico.
They were on the road, and Peter said jokes about their family's past
eveybody was having fun, sharing family laughs
Peter said 1 more joke, and all of a sudden, the laugh was dead
when his daughter said, "That was funnier than what the pastor said!"
Peter became angry, and the wife said "I can explain.."
but Peter yelled, "Too late... I already know everything!"
They all started arguing, so Peter took his eyes off the road
then, he lost control of the car when he was driving and BLOOWWW...
Paramedics rushed to the scene, to get survivor identities
but it was too late... the whole family was dead instantly
But after the incident, here's what was revealin:
through Peter, the devil tried to take 3 of God's children.
But he failed, the family's still living and dead to some
but heaven has opened the door for 4 people... except for one
But when you look close, Peter didn't die in the accident.. odd?
he was dead when he didn't believe in God...
.....now thats the real Crash.
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Old 04-07-07, 02:12 AM   #6
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Passionate Informality

I was tempted by desire, she set my heart on fire
Wish id said goodbye that night she left me in aspire
To always have her close, the path that we have chose
Is distance thatz between us as the obstacles have rose
The blue veins of my body, reach out to touch you softly
Lonliness has made me wish i had you there upon me
My loves fate so uncertain, i can take the hurtin
But only one gurl takes my heart and puts it back in workin
Through all the good and bad, rememberin what we had
I knew one day i'll wake up see you there and i'll be glad
Cuz when tomorrow hits, i'll finally taste you're lips
And realise we're rarer than the sun in an eclipse
So if ya see the light, remember that its right
And nothin else replaces what we had that special night
we're simply meant to be, its doubtless that you'll see
I held you in these empty arms i want you back with me
To walk beside my fate, and guard my heavens gate
So when the devilz knockin you remind him that hes late
Beyond the world we see, another there can be
Waiting for the best emerging from this burdened G
Devoid of all emotions, the dark side of us opens
Like warriors we're marching in neglect of you're demotions
I made it through the war, done sleepin on the floor
And finally my home was filled with love i lacked before
The time of search now over, i spit it like a cobra
My poison fills you're body up and makes another soldier
Without you id of died, the pain i'd feel inside
Yet i can say i'd kill for you and never be denied
I owe you all my love, i just cant get enough
To face you was so hard i never knew it was so rough
We're finally together, inthe end of this endeavour
These hard timez that we live in just cant go and last forever

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