when i spit multies its mathmetically"my rap is chemistry"
i can kill u n three ways cuz my rap style is trinity
if i riped u b4 i'll hop n 2 ya past n do it again jux so u can remeber me
fuck u ya gurl n front of u jux so u can lose all ya dignity
pussies tryna battle me?? ima let my verse fuckem jux so it can lose its virginty
where i leave ya body dats where da feds b
den turn u n 2 a pencil sharpner cuz ima fill u up wit led b
den throw ya bloody body n a pool n turn it n 2 a red sea
i say fuck da police n fuck da rules "so i guess dat makes me a maverick"
i spit punches like dey got brass knuckles onem so da lines i spit r barbaric
so many wanted 2 kill m3 but i madem dissapear like magic
im da captain on da rap ship so da rest r jux waitress n passengers
im da head of dis shit so u can call me da rap ambassador
battlin me ill rip u up like a velocaraptor
n let others finish of ya resadue like a pack of scavengers
u better not step 2 me if u sensitive cuz my rymes will stick 2 ya head like magents
my bullets will hit ya spine n bend ya stucture like a crooket Y-axis
torture ya mind wit crazy flows till ya head cant stand it
drown ya ass wit da flow have u permently vistin atlantis
if step 2 me sayin lets battle i say im n da major leagues son dis aint da minors
cuz i dont even spit flame i spit hell fire
i rip da booth up like i came n wit a pack of white tigers
when i battle my oponets i smokem up like i buy challengers from drug suppliers
rappin hypes me up cuz it stimulates my mouth
i can kill u wit nouns n situate u 6feet under ground
if i spit a lie itz cuz u cant baleave ya self n da flow sent u n denial
when u think death is stalkin u its cuz im on da prowl

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can i get sum feed

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223561

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224394

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Well basicly I wasn't feeling this very much. You showed that you know atleast how to rhyme. And this is what i saw in this OM.

1.No certain concept
2.Throwing words in just to make it rhyme.
3.The lines didnt connect with eachother.
4. Didnt feel that there was much put into this.

So basicly just keep on dropping and elevate. Because you need alot of work and im not saying that to be disrespectful. Just keep elevating and put more into your rhymes.

RTF on my OM thats linked in my sig.


P.S. Please dont use numbers to talk

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