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12-14-06, 01:53 AM
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KP The Known Pussy - Diss track
IP: 2372 BC06
www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
I spit it all man, don't forget to peep the lyrics. yall might not understand some of my personals and shit but he sure should. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3123673 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3123672
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12-14-06, 09:20 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: B417 0F11
I'm guessing this is a diss track to some school kids....
lol @ the long ass acapella before the beat drops. The acapella wasn't bad. I actually liked the delivery on it better than the actual verse with the beat behind it. Punches weren't all that great. They were more of what we used to call gun talk or whatever. You were basically just stating some things about them instead of coming up with some nice wordplay or whatever. It wasn't bad, just nothing going to make us all go "DAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMNNNNNNN" when you don't come up with some really witty shit. Anywho.....not that bad 
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12-16-06, 02:57 PM
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IP: DC5E DE44
nice lyrics man. flow is on. but ur goin mono tone as a mothafucker. now the beats came in. lyrics are iite, flow is off at the start... an ur still monotone through the beats. work on ur delivery an emotion. stay up.
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12-16-06, 08:28 PM
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IP: 9CF2 2208
Don't know why you posted a diss track about some school mate on this site... Weak diss though its kinda like you dont have the right flow to battle... its kinda like you dont mean what your saying but w/e... Lyrics was mediocre and the punches were aight... keep trying.
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12-30-06, 11:38 AM
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IP: B7FD F2A7
haha sounds like some dude you know. but you gettin at him forreal. im lovin the beat. good shit man
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12-30-06, 04:01 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
haha thanks man.....
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12-30-06, 10:41 PM
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
shits kinda cool i agree wit e its like when u ryme without the beat u ryme tighter then the beat jumps in and its like u conforming to it or something but over decent shit on da come up fo sho holla at me trizznack homeboy call the last blast(laugh)
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12-31-06, 03:58 AM
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IP: 2372 BC06
lmfao..word up man
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12-31-06, 09:09 AM
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IP: 5AB8 1212
Yeah..had some nice lines..I guess why
 lolol playin/..yeah this shit was decent..highschool beef is jus played out tho..but nice flow swagger is better and delivery is gettin better holla 1
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