((This is somethin I been throwin around in my mind, hopefully if it turns out right I can get this down and done.... ya boy EXODUS))

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HOOK:
On my block,
Everybody got money to spend.
On my block,
It's no problem try and do what ya can.
On my block,
You only got yourself to depend on...
And on and on and on
Let me show ya how I roll
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I roll like, What's that you wearin?
What car that you drivin?
I spied in, saw some shit that I could ride in.
My boys in Benz's, Lincoln's and Vette's
Ask me what I'll spend and what I think I can get,
It's like, yeah whatever that you said it was
Me and my defecit and all my severed funds.
500 hundred a month, 300 for gas,
Blast back to the fact that I lack that cash.
But on my block it's just hard to believe it
conceive it I ain't deceivin, I make enough cash just to be breathin.
Phones been shut off, electrics been cut off
I'm on top of a bulding, think I might jump off
But I keep writin and rhymin only getting better,
yeah whatever the weather you can call me lil splendor
This here's a collective consentive complete percent of what I got,
Yeah, Exodus and record rips contend to what is hot.
Fuck credit and debit, I'm stuck in the defecit set,
like, is the color of my skin workin to my benefit yet?
I'll keep movin, costs me nothin but time, but worth every penny,
I white boy form B-more, who knew I had it in me?
But I'm out the game now, moved to the high rolla road,
Learned it's hard to live among the rich when my ass is still broke

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HOOK
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My rhymes is like "Whoa"
but my lady she bounced,
yeah she saw what was up, I saw wat she about.
That paper, that jewelry and all of that rich shit,
She don't need to be makin it if she thought I could get it.
But it's harder then that if you got a conviction,
She called me Mr. Lickity split, so fuckin quickely quick
while she steady trickely lickin a slippery dick,
I say save that bitch and fuck the next whore,
I knew she want paper since she moved next door,
The next score, I'm alreay thinkin bout my next score,
Yeah they got all types a merch only but next door.
But I can't do that shit, I can't go that Route
IF I see the judge again then he'll tell me I'm out.
That's ten years suspended, plus more for the crime,
Is it still worth it if I'm buyin my time?

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Bet the dice if you're ready to gamble...............

good shit man i like this piece better than the other one i replyed to that u wrote.....i thought the first verse was better than the second verse...keep writing... ~1~ 7/10