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Old 03-26-05, 08:48 PM   #1
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Babylon

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...Now Come Follow Me... Through the desert Sand...
...Feel the sun burn at your soul...
...one man... one word... trapped in Babylon...
...Now come follow me... through the barren land...
...walking a path of burning coal...
...nothing... no soul... I just travel on...

Things have changed in this great world...
Livin' in a town nicknamed the great whore...
Current day Babylonia holdin' a holy war...
When the heat is on it gets unworldly cold...
I just sit back and scan the crowd... reconnaissance...
Don't mess wit an outcast... it's common sense...
Let me hit ya wit some knowledge kid...
Now everytime you sleep wit a chick... u see it's adultery...
Your sleepin' wit someone else's wifey... & it's too cold to see...
Kids testein' limits... teen pregnancy...
All in a chool run summed up best by non-amnesty...
Drugs and sluts co-exist in harmony...
Wanna get some there is no need for Karma see...
Babylon's like an illegal drug pharmacy...
But the revelation of this town is god's prophecy...
When citizens & kids lose faith like they lost at sea...
Total destruction... aint' no hypocrisy...

...Now Come Follow Me... Through the desert Sand...
...Feel the sun burn at your soul...
...one man... one word... trapped in Babylon...
...Now come follow me... through the barren land...
...walking a path of burning coal...
...nothing... no soul... I just travel on...

...This is the lost book of village turn to chapter three...
...the angel of anarchy foreshadowed them coming after me...
...sawed offs... fords... chevys... tryin' to plaster me...
...the villa looked to the sky and asked Jesus... "Rapture me"...
...& then the clouds gathered above the grave of Patty Duncan...
...Something sent me the word of the awaiting mass destruction...
...I took one more gulp of the bottle of everclear...
...but death... one thiong for me which I willl never fear...
...So what if I'm a mess no one understands the metaphors...
...the parables... the fables... and the lores...
...I'm tryin' to better myself lookin' toward the lord...
...Holy Spirit convict me... I don't like living in the city of whores...
...It makes my lost lamb of a soul more wicked...
...my principal's punchin' my one way hell borne ticket...
...while I'm tryin' to weather the storm as it intensifies effect...
...it puts an end to our lives of debt...

...Now Come Follow Me... Through the desert Sand...
...Feel the sun burn at your soul...
...one man... one word... trapped in Babylon...
...Now come follow me... through the barren land...
...walking a path of burning coal...
...nothing... no soul... I just travel on...

...This is the product of my own blood and tears
...a sinner lost in a cloud of fire consuming lvoe and fears
...now if you hear this song and think I'm goin' sacrilegious
...yo didn't understand but I just aksed forgiveness
...I probably won't be able to summon the self-control within
...but I've escaped the wrath this time around but what's comin'
...Tribulation... Revelation... Iunno but I know It's been
...too long since you all kids felt the drummin'
...all this moanin' about the town will soon cease
...too me the town is diseased and deceased
...In my heart and soul it just does not exist anymore
...but already I feel the contamination of the Devil's fore...
...play... but hey... It'll always be ther but press ignore
...If I can... But I just over came the great whore
...Babylonia... Lawson... Same thing but different
...You rip me... The angel of Anarchy... you rippin' him
...Keep spittin' it... Cuz you'll be the one burnin' in the end

...Now Come Follow Me... Through the desert Sand...
...Feel the sun burn at your soul...
...one man... one word... trapped in Babylon...
...Now come follow me... through the barren land...
...walking a path of burning coal...
...nothing... no soul... I just travel on...
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-26-05, 08:56 PM   #2
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=182864&page=2

Link... just for you Indeph now you can't close it (okay maybe you can but still)
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-26-05, 09:03 PM   #3
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this is dope man...very good use of metaphors...very good description...this could be OM of the month right here..i'll post more fb later
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Old 03-26-05, 09:05 PM   #4
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Thanks man... appreciate it...
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-27-05, 12:59 AM   #5
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yo pretty good...good multies and metaphors along with wordplay...6.5/10 keep it up
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Old 03-27-05, 01:03 AM   #6
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^laughs hard cuz I know you did not read that shit... and if you did... either a) you didn't understand it... or b) think your cool by trying to downplay a vet.

either way... that's the biggest oxymoron of a feed I've ever seen.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-27-05, 01:06 AM   #7
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Dope Explains It All.
Wordplay Was Sicc.
The Chorus Is Trvial And Nice...
Your Scheme Is Of My Interest..
Deep Internal Deliverance...
Perhaps We Can Collaborate On Something Soon?
The Choice Is Yours.
Dope Drop...
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Old 03-27-05, 01:07 AM   #8
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Explained... I feel better

Heir to the Blueprint says:
6.5? Did you not understand it or what...
STACKS OF CASH says:
thats not low ta me
Heir to the Blueprint says:
I'm trying to figure this out... cuz If the two best topical cats on the site say that's bad ass then... how the fuck are you seein' a 6.5..
STACKS OF CASH says:
k 8
Heir to the Blueprint says:
Damn man... that shit just looks bad...
STACKS OF CASH says:
relax man....i didnt call u wack on purpose
Heir to the Blueprint says:
I was like... WTF!!!!! lol
STACKS OF CASH says:
lol

werrd we're cool.
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I Fucked Mack's Mom. And I Liked It.

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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-27-05, 01:09 AM   #9
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Dope Explains It All.
Wordplay Was Sicc.
The Chorus Is Trvial And Nice...
Your Scheme Is Of My Interest..
Deep Internal Deliverance...
Perhaps We Can Collaborate On Something Soon?
The Choice Is Yours.
Dope Drop...

yeah... definately colab if you want

AIM- meaballer05
MSN- rhowe13@hotmail.com

I'd be happy to work with ya anytime... I'm just that chill of a cat.
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I Fucked Mack's Mom. And I Liked It.

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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-27-05, 01:10 AM   #10
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That Was Grimey..
Speaking About The Little Conversation You Posted.
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Old 03-27-05, 01:13 AM   #11
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lol... yeah get at me for a collab.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-27-05, 05:38 AM   #12
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Nice Man. I Liked The Way You Did This. Its Deep Man. You Have Obviously Studied Some Shit From The Bible Or Talked About It With Some Enlightened Cats. This Is One Of The Best Writtens I Have Read On Rv.
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Old 03-27-05, 06:06 AM   #13
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I'm sewin'.....I got Babylon on lock damnit!....... stupid bitch!

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na i'm play'n...this was Doper than the Dopest Dopers...in the whole doping world....WORD


oh and thanx for teaching cats about me...lol....but 4real this was...nice glad to see someone reads besides me
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Old 03-27-05, 11:13 AM   #14
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lol... Yeah... thanks for the feedback everyone.... uppin' for more...
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-27-05, 11:58 AM   #15
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i was really feelin that shit... you were goin at a different style that most people do, and if for every stupid remark about this open mic... i will kill you... lol but anyway, nice vocabulary and structure even though i don't give a fuck about that, and with that being said it was only a matter of sickness to me.. and that my friend on a scale of 1 to 10.. 10 being the best, 1 being the worst.. 9 muh fuck...lol @ 6.5.. peace
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