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07-21-02, 06:21 PM
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~~Vitality Complex Pt.2~~
IP: 976E 087B
Horizontal Buildings Engineered By 3rd Class Breadwinners..
Outside I View A Picketing Cycle Lead By A Single Sinner.. All Tha Followers Jumping On That Singled Out Band Wagon.. Fighting To Rid Tha Devil From Products Of Tha Mans Lagging.. Catching An Echo In That Compact Space Of My Own Memory.. As I Tread Paces In A Place Of Death Preying From Pregnancy.. Or More Like Straying Away, 9 Months Leads To Dissaster.. Eventually Leads To A Hellraiser Using A New Name Of Master.. Demise Education Is Now Taught In Tha New Skool Of Living.. 10 Degrees Of Vision I See A Half Made Apostate Of Whising.. A Single Housing Compartment Goes Into A State Of Emergency.. Impossing A Acquring For Tha 50 Acres Where Hermits Sleep.. A One Man Army Consisting Of 5 Human Beings In Mind Solitary.. Not Law Abiding People But Hold A Medium Status Of Honourary.. Burried Like Monetaries, Lapsed When Concealing Tha Chest.. Birds Eye View Is Subversive, Im No Feather Im Only A Crest.. Adolescence Show Interest In Everything Untill They Exit.. A Few Are Dislexic, While 50 Percent Are On Top Of Deaths Lips.. Or Forget To Mention Watching A Loved One Die This Day.. A Questionnaire That Quotes That "90 Percent Of Men Say".. That They Will Never Discard Tears And Continue Being Manly.. Thats When A Boeing Hits Your House And Contains Your Family.. Your Whole Generation On A Vacation, Now Your Hearts In Ruins.. Pain Or Felicity Is Whats Looming, Wonder What Y'all Choosing? Gangsta Rap Is Confusing, I Can Never Improve In Defecting.. Soldiers Establishing Battle Ground Outside, Im Not Effected.. By Tha Death Game Being Played, Im Too Busy Twiddling Thumbs.. Or Counting Tha Ticks Of Tha Mobile Sun, Tha Destiny Of Sum.. Sitting On Tha Opperation Of A Craftsman, Its All Clockwise.. I Climb Tha Mountain During Tha Avalance And See Tha Rocks Die.. I Trip Over Tha Footpath Which Is Hidden Beneath Tha Sacrilege.. Tha Biggest Fan Of Tha Home Side, In Tha Match Never Happening.. Im Tha Weeds In Tha Garden Of Edan Feeling Tha Mowers Blade.. Tha Environmentalist Wit A House Isolated In An Empty Glade.. I Have No Motivational Drive In This Traffic Of Urbanisation.. Lost In 2 Faces Of A Female Whos Feelings For Me Are Wasteness.. Tha Flavour Of Life Is Tastless, Message Is Tongue Twisting.. A New Soul And Maybe A Essence Is Wit Tha Shopping Listed.. |
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07-21-02, 07:27 PM
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IP: 25CB 861F
damn
that vocabulary is blazin and imagry is blazin thats a nice piece dunn, keep spittin 1 p.s, if it aint 2 much trouble, peep sum of my postz |
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07-21-02, 11:46 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
hott shit playa.. the words were supreme...
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07-22-02, 04:18 AM
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IP: CF42 9535
nice shit here.. ..vocab, flow, and content was very good.. ..
"Horizontal Buildings Engineered By 3rd Class Breadwinners.. Outside I View A Picketing Cycle Lead By A Single Sinner.. All Tha Followers Jumping On That Singled Out Band Wagon.. Fighting To Rid Tha Devil From Products Of Tha Mans Lagging.. Catching An Echo In That Compact Space Of My Own Memory.." ^^ nice opener, started good and stayed on point through tha whole verse "Burried Like Monetaries, Lapsed When Concealing Tha Chest.. Birds Eye View Is Subversive, Im No Feather Im Only A Crest.. Adolescence Show Interest In Everything Untill They Exit.. A Few Are Dislexic, While 50 Percent Are On Top Of Deaths Lips.. Or Forget To Mention Watching A Loved One Die This Day.." ^^ one of my favorite parts and good display of talent.. ..good shit here "Im Tha Weeds In Tha Garden Of Edan Feeling Tha Mowers Blade.. Tha Environmentalist Wit A House Isolated In An Empty Glade.. I Have No Motivational Drive In This Traffic Of Urbanisation.. Lost In 2 Faces Of A Female Whos Feelings For Me Are Wasteness.. Tha Flavour Of Life Is Tastless, Message Is Tongue Twisting.. A New Soul And Maybe A Essence Is Wit Tha Shopping Listed.." ^^ my other fav. part from this.. ..nice endin for this as well, solid verse from beginnin to end.. ..keep it up ¤TwOs¤ |
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07-22-02, 02:15 PM
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..A New Breed of Femcee..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Or More Like Straying Away, 9 Months Leads To Dissaster..
Eventually Leads To A Hellraiser Using A New Name Of Master.. Demise Education Is Now Taught In Tha New Skool Of Living.. 10 Degrees Of Vision I See A Half Made Apostate Of Whising.. A Single Housing Compartment Goes Into A State Of Emergency.. Impossing A Acquring For Tha 50 Acres Where Hermits Sleep.. Ay Rook-E..This verse was extremely ill..I can honestly say I look forward to each next bar when im readin ya pieces, cuz you always on some mind shakin type shit, and i never know which way youre gonna take it next... Vocab was there, multi's, concept..you pretty much got this shit down..My favorite part was what i quoted above, but i liked this bit too: >Forget To Mention Watching A Loved One Die This Day.. A Questionnaire That Quotes That "90 Percent Of Men Say".. That They Will Never Discard Tears And Continue Being Manly.. Thats When A Boeing Hits Your House And Contains Your Family.. Damn..that shits crazy... This piece was on point Rook..im always impressed. stay up with this n keep blessin us. peace. |
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07-22-02, 07:53 PM
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Thanks For Tha Quoting DGR And Remy..LOL, I Dunno Why I Typed That..
Thanks For All Tha Replies.. Appreciate Them.. |
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07-23-02, 03:06 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
DoWn..
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07-23-02, 04:36 PM
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IP: 92E6 7769
man this is the shits fuckin gr8 stuff holl @ mine http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=17560
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07-24-02, 11:37 AM
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IP: 976E 087B
Thanks For Tha Reply..
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