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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
metaman 2 28.57%
Evolution 5 71.43%
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Old 03-13-05, 07:07 PM   #1
Cocaine
Blow Me
 
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From: 412
Evolution vs metaman

IP: 258C A279

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8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-17-05 at 07:07 PM

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Old 03-13-05, 07:08 PM   #2
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Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 07:08 PM.
 
Old 03-13-05, 07:17 PM   #3
Cocaine
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From: 412
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I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too...
................................................go put them in the retirement home
This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle*
You’d have to get an alias...
to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles
Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit
His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it
Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time
You’ll never elevate son...
...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme
Key’d

*Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk
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Old 03-13-05, 07:18 PM   #4
Cocaine
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From: 412
IP: 258C A279

I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too...
................................................go put them in the retirement home
This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle*
You’d have to get an alias...
to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles
Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit
His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it
Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time
You’ll never elevate son...
...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme

Key’d

*Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk
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Old 03-13-05, 09:08 PM   #5
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IP: 5F09 8F0A

metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 09:08 PM.
 
Old 03-13-05, 09:12 PM   #6
metaman
Flyweight
 
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From: Detroit
IP: 5F09 8F0A

this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,*
text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya,
even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,**
you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member,
change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november,
you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess,
i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,***

explanations:
* - in his sig he has best poet for september
** - sylvester stallone aka sly is the host of the boxing show the contender
***he private messaged me to challenge me (pms = private messages / a girls period where she gets cramps and bleeds)
 
Old 03-14-05, 09:20 AM   #7
metaman
Flyweight
 
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From: Detroit
IP: 5F09 8F0A

uppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnn this shyt for votes
 
Old 03-14-05, 05:20 PM   #8
metaman
Flyweight
 
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From: Detroit
IP: 89DE F87E

upppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 03-14-05, 09:20 PM   #9
metaman
Flyweight
 
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From: Detroit
IP: 0825 899A

upppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 03-14-05, 09:43 PM   #10
Ryan Hughes
the real man of steel
 
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From: Jerzy
IP: 58E6 C588

Voted For: Evolution

V/Evolution...he came wit hard hitting punchs also his structure was on point an he had good personals...meta u had a good verse but i seen better from u i felt u came to lightly u need to use more personals in ur punchs....Nohate...RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=E
closer=E
structure=Tie
punchs=E
personals=E
overall=Evolution..

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Old 03-14-05, 11:01 PM   #11
Cocaine
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upping.. thank you sir.. somebody plz vote on dis ish..
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Old 03-15-05, 07:42 PM   #12
metaman
Flyweight
 
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From: Detroit
IP: 5F09 8F0A

uppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn damn can we get some votes we'll return honest votes!
 
Old 03-15-05, 07:58 PM   #13
Cocaine
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fuckin willy...bitch....

uppin this
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Old 03-16-05, 02:23 AM   #14
metaman
Flyweight
 
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From: Detroit
IP: 5F09 8F0A

upppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 03-16-05, 08:30 AM   #15
Effect
..::shut the fuck up::..
 
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Voted For: metaman

I like this verse alot better it had more better punchlines and better wordplay nice flow aswell I just enjoyed reading this battle more it was a pretty close battle and the other verse wasn't consitant in beating metaman...

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