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Old 10-03-05, 04:10 PM   #31
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thanks for tha constructive feed. uppin for more
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Old 10-11-05, 03:03 PM   #32
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thanks for the feed dog, uppin for some more---------------
 
Old 10-12-05, 08:11 PM   #33
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LMFAO
he got that from audible crew from RB...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=171637
listen to "Aint heard that"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=audible
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Old 10-13-05, 09:16 PM   #34
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what does that mean^^^^
 
Old 10-15-05, 06:31 PM   #35
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nice word play flow was ok ill give it a 7 could be better
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Old 10-15-05, 07:01 PM   #36
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E-thugs....



It was decent...but I would have to suggest doing this as an audio track instead...most thug open mics dont fly very well with most people.

Keep it up.
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Old 10-17-05, 11:33 AM   #37
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ight good criticism ......uppin for more
 
Old 10-19-05, 07:31 PM   #38
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ight yall thanks for the feedback..........................
 
Old 10-24-05, 08:26 PM   #39
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ight yall thanks for the feedback..........................
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Old 10-30-05, 09:51 AM   #40
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Connect rhymes with direct lines got grammar books just
To hammer hooks in songs glamour shook domes of dust
This affair bright and blank like airtight tanks my flows blend
As nothing goes in or come out strong like rum no doubt end
Up drinking a cup and thinking corrupt dew rags flout in the wind
Got dismissed from my true job ready to twist new doorknobs
Lap situations with applications for work and burger King is involved
This’ll murder my bling and starve my pocket of cash like a mob
The hood histories has good theories like be ready to run when a gun
Is pulled may live to see another day that’s what mother say no fun
 
Old 10-30-05, 11:10 AM   #41
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??????????????ok
 
Old 10-30-05, 11:25 AM   #42
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it was tight but u got to find ur own idea for gangsta shit being a gangsta/hustler is basiceing ur ideas away from every where eles like say every one over her yawl got to switch it up and belike what nigggas im over here this was iight thow i got to give it a 6.5/10 pual chains shit was tight i like the word play the punches your delivery it was on point it cam and the first nigga he was tight to he clearly stated what was the fuck uo and the secound homie need less vocab and more idea on the toppice ae yawl like rap crew on the net if yawl is im right here check some of my open mices and cyphers see how my styles diffrent thats a (emcee) but yeah yawl should put this shit together well hitme back son nice peace
 
Old 11-06-05, 06:14 PM   #43
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ight good feed son, i'll get at you......................
 
Old 11-08-05, 06:44 PM   #44
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ight good feed son, i'll get at you......................
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Old 11-12-05, 12:04 PM   #45
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ight good feed son, i'll get at you......................
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