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03-02-10, 03:44 PM
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yo, i need your help!...
IP: DD68 5BB4
im working on my album and what not, we are putting together the first song and yeah i was just asking for suggestions to improve it... ima get someone to add bass soon, and drums are coming, i just gotta get ahold of the space to record em... but as far as song structure and overall sound go im looking for suggestions and or tips n shit to make this sound the best it can, bear in mind this is just the second take of the first song on the project..... listen and any feed opinions and criticisms are greatly appreciated... plus ill return feed on any song you want so listen damn...
Like This Album Preview - http://www.zshare.net/audio/732340708d5f634c/
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03-03-10, 07:32 AM
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IP: F8CE 7EC9
ill peep later gonna pass out
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03-06-10, 05:30 AM
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IP: F8CE 7EC9
listening, lyrics are pretty decent,not feeling the beat though but u make it work..2nd verse isnt as good as the first,but decent overall decent no hate..overall 6/10 but like how u rapped to a non rap beat..
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