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08-19-04, 04:39 AM | #1 | ||||||
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This feeling inside
IP: 88C4 C811
Wut im feeling right now:
This feeling came back agen, I just don't really understand it... Its wierd, i dont think it feels like luv? but inside its expandin.. This feeling it doesn't hurt, not even sure if it feels good.... But i feel I need to let go of something, dat i know i should... This girl, my best friend it seems like i knew her forever... Damn, u have no idea i want her n i to be close together... But the chance of that happening, damn its pretty low... But my luv for her won't stop, it just continues to grow... Right now I don't know, I just wanna let go and let loose.. If i could only choose who to luv, then yes her i'd choose.. But once again I can't show it, im here writtin with tears... I think I luv sumwun i knew for 5 months but feels like years.. I guess dats the reason i ain't hungry, the reason i lost wieght.. But like everyone im lonely, but she's wut makes mah life great.. I finally know, I ain't confused, I know wut to do for once.. Imma show her how i feel after i hid it all of these months... I thank the Lord above for finally showing me the right way.. I guess thats wut happens after every night I alway pray... Yes tomorrow imma tell her, just as soon as i see her... Im gonna say, "babe, I luv u, wen i don't see u i get weaker.. When im sick you help me get well and get better... Your who I need, your an angel, your mah treasure.... hey people this is a true story, I just started writting it 10-20 minutes ago, and imma really do it.. please don't make beef, and please tell me wut u think |
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08-20-04, 12:52 AM | #2 | ||||
Simply Dope
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IP: 28AD 5545
thats some real feelins...damn good luck
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08-20-04, 11:08 AM | #3 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 685E CA12
Very emotional, but basic rhyme&flow&vocabulary. Could've been better in those aspects, but the emotion was there & was good.
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08-20-04, 01:25 PM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
feel'n that man , nice flow, who cares if it was basic, the emotion is what matters, and that emotion was there, it was plain and simple and easy to see , nice work keep it up
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