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07-26-05, 09:04 PM | #1 | ||||
Flyweight
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Freestyle (Up in tha clouds type shit)
IP: 9B9E 6219
I just write to recite precise rhythm
like jizm, Spit knaledg out my mouth but y'all take it as wizdm, Fallin' angels from tha sky tryin' to take us wit' em, But I ain't goin' that route I'ma blast and hit em, Goin' against tha laws of gravity causin' cataclysms, I shadowbox wit' myself to see how I'll dodge and get em, 85% plan to 86 wit' a 9, 10% see it but block it off in they mind, When I 4:20 5-0 show up all tha time, And if them niggas is bitches I'm in tha beast all night, Fuck it!!! *85%- the deaf,dumb,and blind majority of tha planet. *86- to kill a plan or action. *9-nine millimeter handgun. *10%- the enlighted yet still wicked. *4:20-the time to smoke marijuana. http://community.rapverse.com/newth...o=newthread&f=5 |
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07-26-05, 09:05 PM | #2 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 9B9E 6219
Just a short freestyle let me know wha' y'all think.
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07-26-05, 11:10 PM | #4 | ||||
I Got Money In Tha Bank
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IP: 7171 290E
lol you said you spit "knaledge"....isnt that contridicting...u need to work on ya vocab homez
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07-26-05, 11:11 PM | #5 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: B48D C7D5
Fo' sho' I'ma keep droppin'. Fo' everybody that show me luv, I appreciate it and much luv to y'all, those that hate... Fuck you.
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07-26-05, 11:13 PM | #6 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: B48D C7D5
How you figure that's contradictin'
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07-29-05, 10:57 PM | #8 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 8A05 210E
well 2 b honest u tried sumthang different den tha otha time but it was missing dat special sumthang 2 set it off but keep writing ur gettin' there
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07-29-05, 11:01 PM | #9 | |||||
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
i liked it homie, i havta be honest i havent read any of ur stuff b4 but i liked it, it was short n sweet, n original,I liked the use of statistics 2. obviously u have room 2 elevate but we all do. RTF peace.
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07-31-05, 01:33 PM | #10 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: D88C 8916
not bad was feelin it should of been a little bit longer in my opinion but its all good get droppin them lines
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