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Old 05-31-05, 11:58 PM   #1
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Vendetta - I Just Gotta
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A track from me...basically my first solo...came out pretty good not the best but i learning to hold my own doing solo tracks but w/e...hope ya'll like it...I used Joe Budden's "Whatever It Takes" beat...i'll probably do a part II to this beat cause i'ma loving it...enjoy

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/cenario_music.htm

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193297

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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 06-01-05, 12:30 AM   #2
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yo some dope shit....there drama...the quality is dope..defitnly not wack....u had good flow to that Budden beat..and i was really diggin it..the only drawback i thought there was, was that the accopella was too loud over the beat..maybe u should fix that but otherwise i give it a 8.5/10 good job...rtf when my shit gets reopened
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Old 06-01-05, 12:49 AM   #3
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decent, ride the beat fine... need more emotion... wont take it to your hotel but cassidy will, dope... honestly thats a solid drop... couldn't find much to hate on... just need to up the emotion a bit or find a lil bit more of your own sound... sounded a lil bit like u were just readin but i liked ya flow, it was really percistant, only got off like once at the begining... ya kid good drop just up the emotion makin me feel the shit a lil more... take a look at my song NICE BOI!!! would appriciate the feed... pz
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Old 06-01-05, 02:38 AM   #4
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 06-01-05, 02:48 AM   #5
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beat is emotional

Flow- kinda weird vibe sounds like u used too much reverb, lyrics was fittin...the samples kinda lifted the lyrics on this emotions felt..."Lust fightin wit love" interestin shit.....i feel like jumpin on this track..lol

overall i think u should rerecord and try to use different setting reverb....and watch out wit echo alittle... and ofcourse my accap added..lol
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Old 06-01-05, 03:36 AM   #6
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i ain't mix the shit...mixing was done by 20...holla at me on AIM dv...my sn is pvendetta2005...i wanted the lil echo affect...at times when i did my dubs i would just say the multi's like i was talking...i wanted that affect...but holla at me...thanks for the feed everyone
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 06-01-05, 03:36 AM   #7
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This was IIght..I Did a Track to This Beat..anyway...Emotion need swork...Lyrics were coo..But with better delivery and emotion..it can really show..flow was choppy..but not bad..
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Old 06-01-05, 06:48 AM   #8
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beat is dope.....hook is dope...

Are you an UK head cause you sound like or like an american with bad speech epidiments

Flow is on point....delivery is nice....

I felt some of the shit you mentioned besdies the baby mamma thing cause I dont have a baby mamma
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Old 06-01-05, 08:27 AM   #9
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are u a rapper who just post on rv and does no music or are u a rapper who has homo countree jay on his myspace friends list and doesnt do music...uppin for more feedback
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 06-01-05, 07:55 PM   #10
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 06-01-05, 11:00 PM   #11
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 06-02-05, 10:27 AM   #12
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Yo Good Chose of Beat, You really did well with it, The Flow was dope, Yah just Gotta get better Mic presence, Like others said kinda sounds like your reading of a piece of paper, Yah Qaulity was very good as well, Yah Lyrics were aight, Nothing special, But yah got mad potential, Overall nice Drop Hommie keep at it..
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the beats nice i think its from budden, the flow was nice but you didnt sound like you was ready on the mic or something, aint feelin the echo-ey thing you added, lyrics straight qualitys iight also, overall just work on your mic presence and try soundin more natural on the mic overall 7/10
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