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Old 11-05-04, 03:46 AM   #1
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Old 11-05-04, 04:15 AM   #2
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We defend our post, readily............ but the land is torn and the sky is black
What are they? man deformed? well.. its our final chance to strike them back
Rifle ready, upright and steady, aimed with front, shot with the back hand
The last stand for what we know as man, supposed kings fighting like aslan
Green beasts spotting us as the pack scanned, looks like our fate is low
dispatched chance, as the hills turned green at the tip, tilting the ratio
Graves below, they advanced a fast slash made a comrade bleed at the hip
Bone displacement, in the attack a man tried to lean, but he slipped
The ogres ate him, chief yelled, im too old to face this, we slowly faced him
"what sir? dont give up! .. what do we do?" he replied: its over, they win.



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Old 11-05-04, 05:25 PM   #3
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we stand there fighting with all we've got, seeming like a shot in the dark...
starts to seem one sided, many have fallen, more come after that remark...
apart from the odds against them, still shooting, the bullets..despensed them...
spark of hope is still in theyr eye, still where they lie, tryin to prevent them...
imense men, they fought hard and well, overcame by ogres, defence fell...
wars are creating history, this is to be another story for us all to tell...
expelling all his bullets but one, stunned that time surpassed so quick...
loaded with the last bullet, took the gun to his head, trigger he pulls it...
rather die knowing did all he could, last man to fall, suicide is all that stood...
push came to shove..then to murder..evil wins this time against the good...
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Old 11-05-04, 07:08 PM   #4
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Ready to kill all us, surrounded by monsters
Tryna figure out how we can withstand a power beyond us
Lookin to attack, we all gotta watch out backs
*POP* *POP*...then We see one collapse..........
That was my mans, now these things is boiling with rage.
They testing my guage, I'm ready to unload on they face.
The platform we stand on is the only thing keepin us safe.
They try to crack it, another goes down in the disgrace.
Bring out the shields, the gats, the spears and more.
We ready to beef, ready to fight, ready for war.
I said it before, take everything as if its ya last chance.
The last dance, we ready to go at em and clash.
Whatever we do, lets go out to win it.......
As we try to defeat the odds, its 6 to 1,000,000

Uh...yeh....
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Old 11-06-04, 11:08 PM   #5
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We gave all we had, but the six of us were hurt
Yet one by one we were set to rot in the dirt
As if there wasn’t enough blood soaked in the earth
Still we kept up the fight, but for what is its worth?
Right now it looks as if we’re all going to die
Tears starting to form as I ask myself “why?”
I look up quickly at the blood red sky
Then I heard another let out a cry
My first officer just took a spear to the heart
Hit the ground, and instantly had been ripped apart
Anger filled my body, rage blinded my sight
I jumped down not thinking of my life, my muscles tight
And within a second, I was ambushed from the right
I was lifted into the air, and I felt the impact of the knife
It was at the time, I prayed for my life
But it was too late, everything became black as night….
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Old 11-07-04, 12:04 AM   #6
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c.s. legends......
the last of a dying breed......

you will not rape our kingdom, we will survive at all costs
nor will you destroy the empire we built, our city wont be lost
side by side, we will fight until our lungs cease to breathe
back to back, we will ride until our hearts cease to beat
aim...fire...reload...another c.s. opposer bites the bullet
when the lead hits the bone, i lose control...i got to pull it
i got to show ya we mean business, dear lord please 4give us
be our witness, sinners versus sinners, until death delivers
i wouldnt want anyone else by my side...i have total faith
the c.s. warlords remain and blood drains from slain fakes
your time has past...we're r.v.'s present...and hip hops future
awknogledge we're da rawest, applaud us, give a few cheers
mighty men and beasts alike have died from our tyrannical fists
its survival of da fittest and we lead da pack of animal clicks
dummies, u just keep coming, we got ammo, we'll keep dumping
resistance is futile, advice=nothing will save u...i mean nothing

god bless the dead and dying......

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Old 11-10-04, 03:44 AM   #7
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well men its time to take the last stand
we got a couple rifles and some pistols in our hand

what we gon do is give it all we got
we gon fuck these bitchs up they wont take this spot

we fight to the death its jus how its gon go
even if we die we kno we won fo sho

we win the respect of fightin till the last breath
what u got to say respect lives after death

even if all our blood is drained on this hill
we gon make sure some of theres gets to spill

we aint playin and this aint no joke
and this aint no fuckin time to choke

we need all the heart u got and the headshots u can make
cuz like i jus said this spot they cant take

if u run out of bullets then use ure knives and bayonets
if these green fucks run up catcha blade in the neck
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Old 11-13-04, 10:29 PM   #8
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Six Suicidal

I look unto his eyes I see the clash of a thousand men.
Brave heart of the military, but they keep failing again.
Their defense is working to it, but it just too much to block.
Battle's bent, devouring devils, cornering them to a rock.
Mad Goblins raging and rampaging, this fights engaging.
This is an insane catastrophe, it's their lives they're waging.
The sky closes its eyes, not wanting to see the pain.
It starts to rain, they fought harder, but nothing to gain.
Horrifying battle, the men’s existence put out to shame.
Desperate need of reinforcements, but no help came.
This battle game, the world's torn apart, left 6 soldiers.
But their determination is strong, harder than boulders.
As they have only one hope left, they unleash the bomb.
Mass wiping out the danger, just by clapping his palms.
But they suffered more, it was a suicidal price to pay.
Earth was no more, and even now,.....it stayed that way.
Other planets have passed on the battle of the great rivals.
And the story was passed on, reknown to be the Six Suicidal.


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Old 11-15-04, 01:04 PM   #9
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Damn.. fear is fuckin startin' to enter our up our system..
Mike took 6 shots at that monster but shit he missed him..
"Mike, what the fuck? throwin' ya helmet won't fuckin' work"!..
Stupid jerk..Damn shit is gettin' out of hand n' going beserk..
So many of them ugly bastards n' we down to 6 solja's..
I't like we on tha bottom of a hill n' they comin like Bolga's..
2 katz wit pistols n' one solja tryed to load up the shotty..
Bang bang 2 of em lost they fangz..Crazy if they think they got me..
Shit iz gettin real hot B.. hurry the fuck up n' load up tha weapon..
But he was a slow one cuz one of em put a spear straight into Stepan..
So wit a load roar we all stood tall n' started ta cuz n' bust..
From dawn to dusk we will not fall cuz freedoms' a must...

Not bad ~1~
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Old 11-17-04, 06:16 AM   #10
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flesh and bones meet chrome
cos chaos kills in colour
im hacking and slicing, but my blades no duller
we all eat flesh and digest
bodies of bloody mess'es
whats left is...
your last breath, souls already owned
hope they paid you real well
if not, you got boned!
fucking maricone, flesh is weak
and if deaths what u seek
take a peek
you frail freak
or has your batty gone weak?
maybe...
they paid YOU
to slay me?
mortal man your crazy
when i was flesh and blood too
i KNEW not to play G
O D
you just did,
on ambition kid,
hells swell for a trip but your about to do a bid
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Old 11-19-04, 06:36 PM   #11
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we overwhelmed em wit attack seems like they furious
our creater a scientist that gotta a lil too curious
the world denied us as a people as a race
so we figured we can take the earth make it our place
embodied in green like the money they use
ambitions to win as we refuse to lose
found a few weapons for reconstruction
but they accused them of beings weapons of mass destruction
as their under attack they warn their people
tellin them that our race is way to lethal
so we figure attack the only way we can make it
and we have them surrounded so their world we take it
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Old 11-19-04, 09:39 PM   #12
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we attack from every direction..they have no way out.
throwing spear's..direct hit..I know they felt.
they should never of tried to steal our weed.
Those white men and there gun's are full of greed.
.so we do what ever it take's to get that ounce.
we will,shoot,run,scream,punch,kick and pounce.
but once we get it back in our hand's.
we will roll a fat joint...cause peace is our true stance.
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Old 11-21-04, 10:50 AM   #13
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Frustration. Suffication. We all are gonna die from this Ogre Attacking Population.
' Fire ! ' .. One click away from blowin this Ogre's Head. Sayin this is the 'Last Part of the Revalations'
The world is about to End. While me n my homies stand are ground blowin these suckers dead.
Fuck'em all I need to find my Rocket Launcher. One soouljaah standin tall. No one can't stop me. I'm strikin them until I fall. [ Weak ] =\
The battle is over. Winnin this great victory. Me n my homies made this shit History.
Takin out my Dad's Rosery. Prayin to GOD how I got threw this mission.
I'm lyrically gifted, with these spiritual words, sinful soulds and been lifted.
Cause i'm a lyrical souljah .. wit a mic on onehand. Now u can say 'I got whoop by a Kid'
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Old 11-21-04, 11:09 AM   #14
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GAHHHH SWEET MOTHER OF FUCKCAKES!!
GREEN MEN ARE TRYING TO STEAL OUR WEED, FOR GODS SAKES!!!

But, sir, they have big mouths and big teeth
We may be here until next week

We are outnumbered, so it seems,
but we have guns, so lick my mancream!

One green monster turned around to look, to see what?
AHHH WE'RE FUCKED THEY HAVE BACKUP!!!!
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Old 11-24-04, 04:54 PM   #15
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GAHHHH SWEET MOTHER OF FUCKCAKES!!
GREEN MEN ARE TRYING TO STEAL OUR WEED, FOR GODS SAKES!!!

But, sir, they have big mouths and big teeth
We may be here until next week

We are outnumbered, so it seems,
but we have guns, so lick my mancream!

One green monster turned around to look, to see what?
AHHH WE'RE FUCKED THEY HAVE BACKUP!!!!

LMAO wtf!?............................................. .....
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