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Check in by: 08-06-06 at 02:25 AM

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Kriptic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-06 01:56 AM.

Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-06 02:23 AM.

haha i was working on a collab..but ill take some time out for ya i geuss lol


a'yo

this cat peeped my whole post in that thread,psssh nigga beat it
he aint have shit ta say
...this cat replyed back like "yo dog i dont even wanna read-it"
sayin i should come back when i learn to spell
...me bad at that? son, i jus-might-be
actully i am,cuz when i go to spell ur name dog
...all i end up with wit is S-H-I-T
you can say im insecure,you think thats dissen-me dog?
im the one that said it? you clowns are jus pissen me off
im comin with punches like a muhammad match
fuck with me son
...im leavin kids head split like -cabbage patch-
i no this is the net but ill pop off-right threw ya screen
on the comp.'s the only time you pushin keys,you aint catchin the green
an you been here a long time but still rappin like a rookie
& ill be -cuttin- this kid, he aint go no class,like hookie
haha for real tho
only kid i can see you beatin..is that stupid-bitch,yo -i -mean- fletcher-
nightmares if you sleepin on me son, like superstition,with -no -dream- catcher-
an i dont got time ta fuck with a nigga like you...but ill do it for fun
& i dont even need a punch here,iv already made a fool-of you son
fuckin with me,, now the kids puzzeled, yeah dog hence MY NAME
so stop actin hard kid, because its a G-uNOT,like GAME
this cat pm'd me sayin i was a pussy and all-that-shit
i sent ya a call out- i aint neva seen a kid log off-that-quick


[[ haha actully...isent him a pm,and made a thread..and TEN minutes later...he logged off]]


kid sayin all that shit & i need 2 months ta pre-write
well you bitched out...
...............so i think its you whos the pussy-right?
if you dont wanna do it up son, stop talking shit
mystic new the deal, IM me sayin he wasnt startin-shit
at least he cleared up weatha he was jokin or not
ill murda you
...imma blazin' son,weatha im smokin' or not
& your nothin,i wouldnt even use you ta butt-out my ash
you the type a dude who moan as he gettin fucked in the ass

[[ then he PM me 15 minutes later... ''i dont got time for that'']]

well if you dont got time kid,then dont let ya mouth -pop-off-
or imma leave 'K' on the ground like i fliped a royals -top-off-
fuck with me for real?
....if so watch ya home,like ya sig, imma be burnin it down
ya fuckin with a bull..
.... yo in the ring with no barrel son, im merkin-this-clown
how many call-outs till you quit turnin em down?
you talk tuff till i respond,now you steady jus lerkin around
im jus fukin with duke, i dont expect ta be hurtin him now
im just sick of these kids talking like they some how above me
& hey,dont accept this shit, two no-shows sound lovely...

hahaha -_-

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Didn't really feel like typing this shit up right now.

Fuck battlin' now... Me and my crew will stop this coward man,
Cause I know what makes Krip tick.. Gettin' clocked by our hands,
Kid, you're a joke... And since it's the pattern thats took,
You too are bitin' words like you're eatin' alaphabet soup,
So go back to your text verse, what will this lame try on me?
Fuck it, I'll still own you dawg, like the humane society,
It's funny cause you play gangsta and when your verse is due,
My punches don't need contact to turn Krips words to blue,
You a gangsta? Then I'll come with knives, bitch i'm hott,
Then see how quick this prick gets scratched like chicken pox,
I laugh in the face of danger... Cause it is lovely,
But in your case? Well.... I hear its bad to look directly at ugly,
You're not the shit, so watch this seed grow,
Cause we know It will since you dropped that dirt on top of it.

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Nice story book, man. It's delightful. Didn't you draw up any pictures to follow the storyline?

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nope...unless you'd like me to show the bitch ass event by you that took place beofre this
:-) i was just tellin it as it happened -_-

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Nice verse good punches, nice way to change up punches into idoms n shit, you had nice wording, good structure...good shit.

....................................uppin for votes.............................

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Voted For: Kirk

kirk-Had an alright verse...had good punches and personal attemtpts ...structure was good..so ur flow made ur punches more appealing...nothing really to complain that much about.....except coming harder

Kriptic-Man you just wrote a bunch of shit haha...no hate dawg none at all..just seems like u were babblin and telling a story about how u guys got into the battle...and i wasnt backing down from u by the i/ms...im just not one of the kids whose gunna waste his time on the net fighting haha...but yea...u need to come creative with punches and create some wordplay...you cant just use qquotes and think its a diss....

Fuck battlin' now... Me and my crew will stop this coward man,
Cause I know what makes Krip tick.. Gettin' clocked by our hands,

vs.

nothing


v/kirk


rtf on either of my links in sig please peace.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

yeah..thnx for the vote...even tho my shit was filled with personals and punches..you guys just like to see nice neat and pretty set up with the verse...oh..and that line you said that was vs nothing.... every battle ive been in..each person has said just about the saem thing....(krip tic...with a clock somewhere in it) haha real original...but thnc for the vote neways.


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well a vote is an opinion...and thats what i gave...to me it seemed you told a story of why ur batteling...and didnt really catch him with personals....just quotes on wut he said..u didnt put it in a creative form or ne thing...just str8 up story mode...no hate dude just tellin u how it is....

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Voted For: Kirk

I wasn't feeling Kriptic's verse at all. It sounded way to wannabe gangsta and the punches that weren't stupid were played out and worded horribly. Nothing special at all popped out to me in it and the whole writing a story about what was going on was just whack.

Kirk, half decent verse, some pretty funny lines..

Fuck battlin' now... Me and my crew will stop this coward man,
Cause I know what makes Krip tick.. Gettin' clocked by our hands,

So go back to your text verse, what will this lame try on me?
Fuck it, I'll still own you dawg, like the humane society,

Nice flow, I laughed a few times. Easy win for you.

Vote: Kirk

story mode? lol it was full of personal...notice, it was all aimed at him..with shit that actulyl happenedmhis had punches that had nothin to do with me... but its cool

and reddy..thnx for the vote.

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