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check in now.....peace,,,,,,,,

this is my check in si i'll be droppin.......

good luck

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Who you think you are I drop the Bombz around here ......
tHE 15 minute time limit got this kid sweatin in fear ....
Another IJL victim ... I just Ko'd theunderated earlier ....
Now we got another challenger & he he actin gurlyier!....
Cant even come with a decent punch .... I believe my hunch
Beat you like theres 12 months ... a garuntee like phille makes them blunts
Truth is you'll get smoked like the herb that you really are ....
You bore people to sleep like you actually spit Sealy bars ...
Weapon of Mass Destruction but your sig lies to Rb's eyes.....
U aint nothin but consumption & addition to -Technician-'s pride

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Hit with full destruct, struct you once, and already your stuck,Forever ya' clutched, bruised lyricaly, used the bible and prayed to god,still couldn't win this miracally, runnin' into a plague of black death, facts is left but the acts of an ax to ya' head, pack of max flow, couldn't move me, thought it was facts? couldn't prove to be raw will skillz, 15 mins with 10 lines these laws I kill, ruthless I don't care, I leave you flat without a spare, clear and said, get near dread the scare of a pussy niggah who dared, so wheres the truth? Since youth I known, your act of cockiness and talent is all talk, cuz I don't see where its shown..

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This Battle One Handedly Goes To BombZ I Was Feelin His Punches,His Flow And His Vocabulary On The Other Hand Technicians I Liked Your Flow As Also But Thats Really All You Had And You Didnt Really Have Personals..

Overall Vote-BomBzZ

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blah wack battle...both of you go kill yourselfs....lol
Worse verses I've seen from either of you...
Umm Bombz..you didn't have any punches...just a mest up flow
And multies here and there..umm..subpar wordplay
You had no personals..and ya structure was effed up

Tech..your verse was shit too...just not as much
you actually attempted somewhat punches..like
Phillie/blunts..umm and ya last bar...
had personals...but really wack..don't come this wack again
Both of you...up ya games..or try next time

v/ Tech

yea........^..........i'm drunk so its all good................just a random battle.............
UPPPN......../////...............

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lol....i forgot to post a link...
here ya go...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...356#post1146356

.. Clear To See WHo Got This ..
.. Bombz Keep Battlin And u'll Elevate ..
.. But Techinican Got This Hands Down ..
.. Vote..Technician

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this battle was fuckin horrible. tech u had an aight flow, and structure, just the punches were iffy...bombz i don't kno wut the fuck u were doin, u tryin to freestyle..cuz that verse was horrible, i seen you come allot better, that aint even u'r style nigga...aight well, tech was more creative and came better...vote-tech

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I must say...I'm a little dissapointed..I expected something better from Tech...Bombz this was your first battle I've seen and I was not impressed...Tech had few more punches that hit..flow was about the same...both of ya had a decent wordplay going on..Tech had a way better structure..vote-Tech

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