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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
07-10-06, 10:38 PM
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Rise to Power Pt.1
IP: 8373 C3D8
Verse 1 Yo Yo it was Queenz New York, kid was raised in the streets had to hustle to eat Momz was OD'd his Popz heart was skip'n a beat His name started off as Kenny, kid was skinny, but he was sick of the bullshit So went down to Harlem n ran through the liquor store, let off a whole clip Sent to Juvie, got a year and a half, thought out the process as time passed Listen'n to old Raekwon tapes, he figured out how to manipulate the cash Got back on the streets, left his home, Momz didnt realize her only son was gone But he had a plan to make it big even if it meant mow'n lawns He heard about G Money, the god, untouchable, yea the drug lord Now dis was around '88, but he decided to live the gun and die by the sword Now Kenny started off small, run'n robberies for G Moeny, dressed in all black Until the new epidemic came, coincidently it was the begining of crack............... Verse 2 By this time Kenny had a lil fame to his name and was start'n get sum shine Until G Money realized he was almost a boss in no time So he had to get rid of 'em, kill 'em off quick, pretend it was sum shiesty shit Kenny new it was come'n so he caught Money off guard, ended up take'n over his shit Now Kenny was a made man, he had niggaz run'n the streets for him, yea he paid the cost This was the begining of a new era, Kenny had now became Boss See over the years, base heads became worse, started fiend'n for a hit Boss was different from Kenny, he lost his morales, even sold crack to a pregnant bitch Boss didnt no it but he had now become G Money, a heartless bastard who didnt give a fuck But he had an apprentice, and over the years Boss never learned to duck So at the height of his reign, Boss was killed in the cold by the only one he held close His sidekick, runner up to the crown, but he ended up get'n heated wit the toast Over the years he had a good run, but he didnt run wit crew, only a few And the one in his circle who split his wig turned out to be G Money's nephew Now we turn to his story............................................. ...... Last edited by Mic Young : 07-10-06 at 11:00 PM. |
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07-10-06, 10:46 PM
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IP: 8373 C3D8
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2790887
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2790890 there u go fam lemme get sum feed |
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07-10-06, 10:59 PM
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Above Originality
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IP: AFAB DA78
ok this was koo...it would sound better on track but this is still nice i like the flow it was koo nice drop my dude stay up and bring the heat!
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Chryme Syndicate
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07-10-06, 11:00 PM
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IP: 8373 C3D8
yo good look'n son
uppin dis....................... |
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07-10-06, 11:13 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: EC57 4160
yo defitnly not bad wit u being kinda new (most of the time new means new ta rap)
and this being a o.m i was kinda assuming it'll just be another wack o.m like usual but freal this wasnt what i expected....u DEFITNLY have storytelling ur storytelling is best...ur flow is ight it had some rhythm dunno if it'll go to a beat or not..maybe....for it being lyrical it got kinda basic but it kinda hard being lyrical when u plotting out a story while u keep it rhyming so yea no sweat there overall this was decent..i'd give it a 7/10 keep it up young one and u might build urself a reputation (hopefully beyond a website) |
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07-10-06, 11:22 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 8373 C3D8
good look'n but yea i got deal wit this indie label in Queenz i'm jus here to test out my material
thnx my nigga uppin |
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07-11-06, 01:09 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: EC57 4160
yea werd up yo ima go and shit but yo if u do audio u should holla at me sometime..and show me some shit freal...pc
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07-11-06, 01:16 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 31CB E68E
yeah this was aight, flow was good and and all...nedds more imagery to make it more grasping but if ya doing it for audio it should roll. Aight stay up
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07-11-06, 10:53 AM
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Peg Citys Finest
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IP: 075E 3722
that definitly gona be a dope audio for sure man.
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U can't Touch tha Untouchble Break tha Unbreackable Shake tha Unshakeable Move tha Unmovealble |
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07-11-06, 04:50 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: F69F C93D
dats wasup fam
uppin dis for sum feed yo |
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07-12-06, 12:14 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 1A0D 318E
uppin......................................
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07-13-06, 12:03 AM
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IP: CCEE 91DD
yo lemme get sum feed kid
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02-06-07, 06:00 PM
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IP: 94DC 16F7
Feedback yo..........................
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02-07-07, 09:52 PM
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IP: F1E5 C4C0
Sounds mad cool for a starter, and Pt. 1.
I feel like though it loses a bit of flow in verse two somewhere around, Quote:
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02-10-07, 06:32 PM
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IP: A1B5 6324
i was feeling this i give it a 7.5 , you got nice flow
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