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Old 02-07-05, 01:26 PM   #1
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<<<<god's Callin>>>>

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TRUTH BE KNOWN


Chorus *
Look at all the children..ren..ren
Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther
look at all their parents...rents...rents
Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther
Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn..
{So Tell me}..Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
{history repeats itself}....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn..
{Maybe}...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
{Is cuz history repeats itself}......
Look at all the children..ren..ren...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ,{Now Take A}
look at all their parents.....rents...rents...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn

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Verse 1*
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Strap in hand he lived his life as a half a man
Robbin people with a black bandana made in pakastan
he moved errorless, thought he was a smooth terrorist
till a sniper helped him "lose his mind".. {BOOM,,there it is}
Across the floor ..bet he wont rob no more
now you got a sniper on the roof who wont stop the gore
as be bursts away, people could'nt run when they heard the bang
not that they're "spineless" they just got no more vertabre
when ya half whacked, i guess thats 1 way to "blast back"
he thought to him self reach'n 4 a clip in his backpack
but the script was just not fun, cuz the clip was the wrong one
and the last thing he saw was "the light" from the tip of the shot gun
& and behind the spark was a young man who's mind was scarred
by an inherited hatred dwelling deep inside his heart
listen and think as you here this mystery deplete
and you'll see life as i see it watch'n hystery repeat


{ITSELF}
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Look at all the children..ren..ren
Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther
look at all their parents...rents...rents
Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther
Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn..
{So Tell me}..Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
{history repeats itself}....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn..
{Maybe}...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
{Is cuz history repeats itself}......
Look at all the children..ren..ren...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ,{Now Take A}
look at all their parents.....rents...rents...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn

========================================

***************Semi Chorus********************

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
theres gotta be a way,
To save us from this life
maybe another place

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
theres gotta be a way,
To save us from this life
maybe another place


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Verse 2* ==Now My Personal Thoughts
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open the gates, why you make me hold up and wait
flesh corrodes and decays, while you already known my fate
in this dome alone i must wait, know'n my soul can exscape
threw astral projection but the boundries hold us at stake
im just try'n to get a glace of that holy estate
cuz here on earth it aint going so great , im grown'n with hate
no matter where i go im still exposed to a snake
please keep me from these hope steal'n fakes, cloakin their face
but you knew this before the world even floated in space
so many questions arize but i realize untold they must stay
till that horrible day when a war will give way
cause'n a glorious place to explode in a rage
show'n a global display of fireworks no one exscapes
we've read your word you've poken in grace to show us the way
but im still hope'n threw praise that those who never truly woken, awake
to see you carry most of the weight on our path chosen to take

Chorus *
Look at all the children..ren..ren
Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther
look at all their parents...rents...rents
Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther
Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn..
{So Tell me}..Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
{history repeats itself}....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn..
{Maybe}...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
{Is cuz history repeats itself}......
Look at all the children..ren..ren...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
Play'n with 1 another...ther...ther...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn ,{Now Take A}
look at all their parents.....rents...rents...Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn
Murder'n 1 another...ther...ther....Whhhhhhhyyyyyy yyyyyyooooouuuuu cccrrrrryyyyyy'nnnnn



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ALSO EXSCPECT TO HEAR THIS ALL OVER THE WORLD AND EVEN BETTER ...AND BETTER ----AUDIO IS THE BEST WAY ...YALL AINT HEAR NOTHIN YET....
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Old 02-08-05, 04:17 PM   #2
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Old 02-09-05, 05:01 PM   #3
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Old 02-09-05, 06:12 PM   #4
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This is more of an open mic then poetry man...im feelin the emotion buttttt u didnt have to make it like u were singin the shit lol no but it was pretty tight the second verse was hot as fuck especially the openin bar mad propz maybe one day youll be as good as me

it flowed nice...the structure was good and all...the topic was a good choice...multies all the way through lol except u didnt have to underline them..there was alot of emotion flowin through out the whole peice the first verse was good but u really ripped it in the second one
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Old 02-09-05, 07:07 PM   #5
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yeah thanx...with ya weak assed flows..lol.....j/p
one day i will get on ya level hopfully ...peace
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