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reloaded 5 100.00%
hang-man 0 0%
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Old 01-15-05, 04:57 PM   #46
Pleim
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Voted For: Reloaded

iight iight coo battle best lines were

even sinner and lil cali would be ashamed for you to be on this site,
with a record like that, i think you should switch off your computer and recite...
you came up over the moon, "another newbie i can try to beat"
newsflash bitch, by the time reloaded is finished with you, it will be your 15th defeat
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u'r in a League’s of drag, I’ma bring back incentive though
make the mag punch ya chest n’ centerfold u

but yea realoded had more hotlines i think but this was a reall coo battle and i think yall need to work on punches summore and shit cuz they wasnt that hard but it was a coo battle okay. vote on the links in my sig please, vote-reloded
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Old 01-15-05, 10:35 PM   #47
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aww man this is crazy for real whatever uppin for more votes
 
Old 01-16-05, 05:52 AM   #48
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Old 01-16-05, 11:57 AM   #49
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Old 01-16-05, 12:23 PM   #50
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Voted For: Reloaded

Reloaded got this
punches were harder...structure was aight kinda stretched though...vocab was good...flow was aight...butoverall good drop...but the punches couldve been harder though
Hang-Man...decent drop from you...but yo punches could've hittin & been harder though...your structure was in palce...decent vocab and a good flow..but the punches could've been harder though

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Old 01-17-05, 06:49 AM   #51
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Old 01-17-05, 10:19 AM   #52
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Voted For: Reloaded

one sided really.

Hang-man: i wasnt feelin ya verse at all man. The punches seemed weak. Some good multis and good attempts at metaphors. Structure and flow seemed off and wasnt brilliant to read. Good attempt but keep elevating bro.

Best Bar: "foot to the jugular, put in ya place, you a punk
only time you got out ‘da hood, it was straight to the trunk"

Worst: "fuck assumptions, there’s nuttin to argue, ya soft
left the gat at home, I came packin barbeque sauce"


Reloaded: Good verse. Real good. Your punches were hitting hard with good effect, personals in there, metaphors coming at him hard too. Honestly heavy verse. Seems somewhat wasteed tho against his verse, you could have won this with half the talent used in this battle.

best bar: "ill try to be descrete, your the rv's pitbull, for that i think mad dog's gonna bite,
little faggot, i spit rhymes for fuel, ill spit all on you then get the lighter, ignite." -Not 100% sure this was the best bar cos it was all good.

worst: none
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Old 01-17-05, 10:27 AM   #53
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lol tnx.... you think that was good i brought that up in 5 minuts... anywayz thanks for the votes... 1 more to go.... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 01-17-05, 02:12 PM   #54
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Old 01-17-05, 04:42 PM   #55
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Voted For: Reloaded

i gota go with reloaded on this one

lets get this cracking i'm about to hang-a-man, i plan to sqaush this can,
with that record im suprised you aint been banned, this was over before it began,
^^nice opener....decent pnuch but a lil self glorify
you came up over the moon, "another newbie i can try to beat"
newsflash bitch, by the time reloaded is finished with you, it will be your 15th defeat,
^^good punch very well worded
ill try to be descrete, your the rv's pitbull, for that i think mad dog's gonna bite,
little faggot, i spit rhymes for fuel, ill spit all on you then get the lighter, ignite.
^^nice punch
your gonna wish you wern't even born, actually maybe you were hung,
i bet mummies little boy didnt no you are on rap sites... your a little too young,
^^lol humerous punch
even sinner and lil cali would be ashamed for you to be on this site,
with a record like that, i think you should switch off your computer and recite...
^^decent punch

came pretty consistant on this.......you lines were stretched a lil bit so that threw off your structure.......you had non-stop punches to this kid......they just jept comin.....good flow as well too........you also didnt have too basic of vocab..still need some bigger words though.....coulda threw in some personals though.......but good drop

u'r in a League’s of drag, I’ma bring back incentive though
make the mag punch ya chest n’ centerfold u
^^decent punch but though and you dont rhyme
fuck assumptions, there’s nuttin to argue, ya soft
left the gat at home, I came packin barbeque sauce
^^humerous but wasnt really a punch
you already lost, I’m the boss, it’s just not fair to ya
I base my rhymes on facts, you just base on the regular
^^iffy end rhyme nice multi's weak punch
foot to the jugular, put in ya place, you a punk
only time you got out ‘da hood, it was straight to the trunk
^^good punch
not shit, think you puttin in work, you stop quick
send you on a private vacation when Island can actully hydro-flip nigga im done cuz i gotta go U'VE BEEN OWNED
^^hella strethced that last line.......weak punch

you came pretty weak...you had one actually good punch...........you need to up your vocab.....and some of your lines didnt have end rhyme.......you had better structure though.......not really any personals...........i've seen better from you man.........

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