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02-16-04, 03:29 AM | #1 | |||||||
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the rhyme method
IP: ACF8 CCBB
When i spit it could interfere and intterrupt your hearing/
It could knock off your earring and hurt your feeling/ I speak based on how my mind is designed and when you see me its so contempt that when you attempt to fire back itll lash again like rewind/ The method that i teach will disturb based on the verbs that i inject through the brain like poison and drugged like your on herbs/ The rhyme technique can shine any day anytime in anyway even if the skies are grey/ No matter what i say they still hostile that once you graduate from my school using the method will up you in the future on your skills/ The method circulates and cycles until you get to injured like jwill on the motorcycle/ You gotta stay constant and contest to all best to beat the rest that you defeat is whats your quest/ You cant just fall and quit cause then you wont be able to spit, youll just get hit until your in a stable condition/ You cant be bitchin cause whatever your decision is gonna be based on if your an icon or an old guy mowin the lawn/ The method contains and will remain whatever an emcee thinks to get the technique for the future so he/she can speak on whatever topic they choose to decide/ So they stay balanced and abide by their own pride/ Then they can burn the emcee like they using weapons and be battlin Whatever street they reppin to show how tough it is where they come from/ and rep for any girl that they cum from/ Bitches couldnt fight this method no matter how hard they protected like a condom/ So use the method wisely and utilize with ease and it will give you the keys to the next door to open/ And dont just sit there hopin the break from all your dopin/
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02-16-04, 07:09 AM | #2 | |||||||
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thought you had some nice multis, and would have had a good flow if some lines werent stretched, it still flowed ok... some of ya vocab was a bit played out.... andi would maybe have split it, but it wasnt bad,,, quite an interesing read,, and the scheme was decent... not bad... keep at it
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02-21-04, 03:55 AM | #3 | |||||||
I Like Males More
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IP: ACF8 CCBB
thanks, more feedback please
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It doesnt matter if you win as long as you give everything in your heart - michael jordan I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am. - 2hot2handle(myself) |
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