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diman 0 0%
GKillaz05 5 100.00%
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Old 08-05-05, 12:26 PM   #1
GKillaz05
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diman vs GKillaz05

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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Old 08-06-05, 03:48 AM   #2
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diman has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-05 03:48 AM.
 
Old 08-06-05, 03:53 AM   #3
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your last battle was recycled, soft and played.
and how am i wack, when dimans get you layed?
your the same ole, nothing new like maples in canada.
matches give you asthma huh, ya like retarded stamina.
a W could be yours, might i write the rest soberly.
gkillaz is figurative in battles, but literal with def poetry.
youll write ya own i hope, instead of 9ths quote for quote.
and if i lose...ill know they based the votes on posts.

7 minutes, and im out.
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Old 08-06-05, 11:05 AM   #4
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Old 08-06-05, 11:20 AM   #5
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DI man, CI man hope that you really like to lose chump...
Dimans spit is very cold body must be full of goosebumps...
Gettin' fucked like a loose rump... and he seems to like it....
You dont excite shit your below iight y dont you just quit...
Your lines cant progress, there going in circles like a relay...
Readin' your battles is like watchin' a movie n hitten replay...
There all the same, borin' n lame makin' us snore is ya game..
Hopin' your shit pre-write, puts me to sleep, what a shame...
Kids to lame, like a movie that wont just get to the point....
Sorry to disappoint, but your not even on a roll wit a joint...
Diman
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Old 08-06-05, 01:19 PM   #6
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Voted For: GKillaz05

DI man, CI man hope that you really like to lose chump...
Dimans spit is very cold body must be full of goosebumps...
^^^weak punch......2/10
Gettin' fucked like a loose rump... and he seems to like it....
You dont excite shit your below iight y dont you just quit...
^^no punch.....1/10
Your lines cant progress, there going in circles like a relay...
Readin' your battles is like watchin' a movie n hitten replay...
^^weak......3/10
There all the same, borin' n lame makin' us snore is ya game..
Hopin' your shit pre-write, puts me to sleep, what a shame...
^^weak....lyrics put you to sleep?..c'mon..2/10
Kids to lame, like a movie that wont just get to the point....
Sorry to disappoint, but your not even on a roll wit a joint...
^^no......3/10

Weal verse here.First couple of bars were just weak.They didn't seem to diss well.And that movie replay line is so uncreative.Plus...wat kinda concept is his music puts you to sleep?That's too basic.

your last battle was recycled, soft and played.
and how am i wack, when dimans get you layed?
^^no punch....0/10
your the same ole, nothing new like maples in canada.
matches give you asthma huh, ya like retarded stamina.
^^weak punch...2/10
a W could be yours, might i write the rest soberly.
gkillaz is figurative in battles, but literal with def poetry.
^^^weak.....2/10
youll write ya own i hope, instead of 9ths quote for quote.
and if i lose...ill know they based the votes on posts.
^^No punch...0/10

Ok....you had less lines that Gkilllaz...so you gave him a really good advantage.And you had lines that weren't punches.SAYing you gonna lay him out(1st bar) and the last line will not get you votes.Work on your punches and finding some fresh concepts to use.

Vote-GKillaz
RTF below please
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Old 08-06-05, 10:15 PM   #7
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Old 08-06-05, 10:16 PM   #8
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^^don't forget to RTF please......................
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Old 08-06-05, 10:33 PM   #9
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done....thx for returning the favor GKillaz....appreciate it....
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Old 08-08-05, 11:35 AM   #10
GKillaz05
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Old 08-08-05, 03:51 PM   #11
taz
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Voted For: GKillaz05

V/gkillaz05

Punches-Diman you through punches but for some reason ur punches didnt hit him......Gkilla had good fressh disses that hit hard

Personals-Gkillaz got em wit personals diman was played and talked about who is gunna win, didnt effect gkillaz

Structure-Gkillaz structure is better as u can see...had better flow....diman ur structure was bad and didnt even get to 10 lines lol

Originality-Both kinda whack but gkillaz shined more wit his fresh disses

Multis-Both lacked GOOD multis so i say tie didnt effect either verses

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Old 08-09-05, 07:13 AM   #12
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Voted For: GKillaz05

diman

your last battle was recycled, soft and played.
and how am i wack, when dimans get you layed?
^okay opener, not really hardhitting though

your the same ole, nothing new like maples in canada.
matches give you asthma huh, ya like retarded stamina.
^hehe good wordplay, cool punch

a W could be yours, might i write the rest soberly.
gkillaz is figurative in battles, but literal with def poetry.
^okay bar right here

youll write ya own i hope, instead of 9ths quote for quote.
and if i lose...ill know they based the votes on posts.
^lolz at first line, nice

GKillaz05

DI man, CI man hope that you really like to lose chump...
Dimans spit is very cold body must be full of goosebumps...
^aight opener, could've been worded better

Gettin' fucked like a loose rump... and he seems to like it....
You dont excite shit your below iight y dont you just quit...
^nah not feeling this last line, first was good

Your lines cant progress, there going in circles like a relay...
Readin' your battles is like watchin' a movie n hitten replay...
^hehe nice bar, good wordplay formed into punch

There all the same, borin' n lame makin' us snore is ya game..
Hopin' your shit pre-write, puts me to sleep, what a shame...
^felt to me like a filler followin up your real killer bar

Kids to lame, like a movie that wont just get to the point....
Sorry to disappoint, but your not even on a roll wit a joint...
^hehe nice wordplay again as a closer
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Old 08-09-05, 10:02 AM   #13
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Old 08-27-05, 03:13 PM   #14
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uppin.....................
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Old 08-27-05, 06:41 PM   #15
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