|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-05-05, 05:30 PM
|
#16
|
|||
|
Poet's Daughter.
|
IP: 62C3 7065
Alright Up for more votes...Dab don't close this.
__________________
mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
|||
|
|
|
10-05-05, 05:36 PM
|
#17
|
|||
|
1926
|
IP: 0825 899A
Hey Chip,
'Topical Battle Of The Month' For September Is Still Open.  |
|||
|
|
|
10-05-05, 08:57 PM
|
#18
|
|||||
|
A Life Of Chryme
|
IP: 3240 794D
ATTICUS:first off...your structure...wasnt really a problem to me...it seemed to flow nice...
your vocab wasnt so great...but you incorporated the nessacary amount of it i think your imagery was very vivid....i think you led me to feel as if i was ur right hand man your emotion...man you made me feeel your anger ur feelings for the girl and everything not one mistake in that catergory.....i know this has to be about columnbine.....although this isnt one of ur stronger pieces...its still an exceptional piece at that...man for real...i appreciate this tribute...and beutifull piece....overall 8/10...keep it up for real....1 TWEETY:Your verse was felt mammy, i feel you had good structure..liked how u moved it around and made me mroe influeneced to read it..your vocab was good..liked how you incorporated enhanced vocab...ur flow was tight...everything was put together well...my only problem with this was...i couldnt really piece it together..i feel ur emotion and imagery was lacking just a bit...i feel u should focus on ur verse period other than how ur verse looks overall 7/10 v/atticus keep it up fo real yo u 2 are dope
__________________
A LIFE OF CHRYME |
|||||
|
|
|
10-05-05, 09:40 PM
|
#19
|
||||||
|
Whys That?
|
IP: 5285 DC82
vote atticus. dudes dope.
|
||||||
|
|
|
10-05-05, 10:05 PM
|
#20
|
|||
|
Poet's Daughter.
|
IP: 62C3 7065
*sigh* Look's Like atticus won this...Good Battle Atticus...See you in the future on rv...Ditto..and I want to add that this was the best Topical battle I've ever been in...Shoot Now I Know who's my competetion
...Peace.
__________________
mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
|||
|
|
|
|
10-06-05, 06:10 AM
|
#21
|
|||
|
1926
|
IP: 28AD 5545
... Lola Cruez,
I Still Love You |
|||
|
|
|
10-06-05, 02:22 PM
|
#22
|
||||
|
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
|
IP: E209 CF04
lol.. atticus wins..
__________________
www.FG-Servers.com    |
||||
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
