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Old 09-06-05, 11:42 AM   #1
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Topic: Future Drama
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Old 09-06-05, 11:49 AM   #2
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check. . . . . .
 
Old 09-07-05, 01:08 AM   #3
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sup, glad to see this tourny going forward.

Lets do this!!!


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Old 09-07-05, 11:42 AM   #4
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Sorry but i forgot to add line limit.. the line limit is 20 min and 50 max


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Old 09-07-05, 12:28 PM   #5
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ysdat wins, i aint gonna be able to drop....
 
Old 09-07-05, 04:46 PM   #6
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Future Drama


*As enter the past, I know questions will be asked*


The question on everyones mind is similier at first glance
take another look there soldiers around with a rehearsed stance
I gather my things and try to leave this inquisitive group from the past
But I relise a young girls left her question till last.

"please sir" she says in despair
"In the future does anyone acctually love and care?"
I look at her in shock....

.....such beautiful eyes ask's such a heartaching question
people around gasp,but they should start taking lessons
I pick this girl up and walk as the crowed follows
animals stand aware I hear the chirp from load swallows
why you worried about the future at such a young age of yours
she seems diffrent,her eye's look around gaze then pause
she tell me of dreams she had since she can remember
visions of corruption,murder and buildings falling in september
I tell her its not for her to worry about evolution its natural
.....................she ask's will i experiance love?
looking deep into her blue eyes I tell her "that you will"
but the future can be rough for those who fail to prepare
once the realism of it all hits it can inflict fear
things are alot of diffrent from now,you gotta stay more vigulant
drugs are apparent ,plus lifes are taken thru stimulant
Sitting down with this child on my lap a tear leaks from my soul
I tell her "in the future everyone wants hate your goal
co-operation isnt apparent,everyones out for themselfs
earth is no longer about family and love.but simply about your wealths

*I stand up walk back into the zorb that brought be to the past and return to my life.....
.....the year 2000 ....the past's futures drama*


-Ysd@-


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Old 09-07-05, 09:43 PM   #7
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damn.. ysdat drops verse wen he already sed he wont drop lol.. nice verse by the way.. but i'll still beat you ;O) muhahahhahaa
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Old 09-07-05, 10:11 PM   #8
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I key'd the entire thing,simply cause he said he wasnt going to drop.

I cant not post that would be not posting and shit
 
Old 09-07-05, 11:16 PM   #9
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lol.. i was playing round wed i sed nice verse lol
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Old 09-09-05, 01:12 AM   #10
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*throws rock at dabatos*
 
Old 09-09-05, 10:55 AM   #11
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hehehehehehehehe.........
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Old 09-11-05, 10:21 AM   #12
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Lmao...

Vote: Ysdat for showing *shrug*
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Closed
Ysdat wins due to no show.
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