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Old 10-22-05, 01:47 PM   #1
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No need to check in or anything.. Verses Due before Next Friday..

you guys know the rules..

topic: Distant Imagination


G'd Luck Fam.. This is officially the Championship

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Old 10-22-05, 09:41 PM   #2
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check. Good topic. lest do this atticus. Going to be a fucking solid battle.
 
Old 10-23-05, 02:23 PM   #3
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Woop Woop


... Checking In.

Best Of Luck To You Ys.

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This Battle Is Going To Be Exactly What It Is, "Championship."
 
Old 10-28-05, 05:10 PM   #4
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... Extension Needed.
 
Old 10-29-05, 01:22 AM   #5
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extension granted...
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Old 10-29-05, 03:42 PM   #6
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yeh Ill take that extension.
 
Old 10-30-05, 04:16 AM   #7
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-30-05, 01:19 PM   #8
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Hurry the fuck up and drop you dumbass motherfuckers. It takes thirty minutes to make a verse.
 
Old 10-30-05, 06:00 PM   #9
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Sinner:
"Father Forgive me for I have sinned
I try to think about how different it might have been
If I'd have spent a little time with the Guy
To try to find why but I was blind in these eyes that Cry"


Priest:
Don't disquise the lie you're hiding from me my son
The Lord loves you, he died because He's the One
Who sees what's done, he's happy with Passion
To make Blasphemy absent if you ask him, so tell me exactlly what happened


Sinner:
"It was actually back when I was only a child
I hadn't been to home in a while
Go and open my file, I was in the Hospital often
The Cops thought my Pops was a possible option
My Father was watchin me, strong it wasn't him
It was someone I probably was wrong for trustin then
I must've been just ten I had to bandage my knee
It was damaged and bleeding, he took advantage of me"


Priest:
Did you manage to see, the person who did this
Or know his purpose of interest?


Sinner:
"That's my personal buisness!
I need merciful wisdoms, that's why I came to Confession
So tame me with blessin' from my anger aggression
I was aimin my Wesson then considered it further"


Priest:
"Son, what was the sin you commited?"


Sinner:
"Murder!!!"
...........
"I spit the burner and unloaded the clip
His head exploaded and ripped till it was opened and dripped
It was grosser then shit but I wanted him more dead
I poured led through the front of his fore head
And all the gore bled on the floor red"


Priest:
"Son, you know well you'll go to Hell, and jail's scary
You can't expect forgiveness by sayin Hail Mary
Sin prevail's rarely from the Culprit with in
And killin is the ultimate sin"


Sinner:
"YOU'RE FUCKING FULL OF SHIT FRIEND! HOW THE FUCK CAN IT BE WORSE THEN
TREATING A LITTLE BOY LIKE HE WASN'T A PERSON?
HE DOSEN'T DESERVE IT? IS THAT WHAT YOU'RE TRYIN TO SAY?
YOU SEE A KID CRY AND PRAY WISHING HE COULD FLY A WAY
WISHING HE DIED THAT DAY? HE USED TO BE SAFE
NOW HE'S GETTING ABUSED AND RAPED, LOOSIN HIS FAITH
HE'S BRUISED AND HE'S CHAIFED, CRYIN, BLEEDING AND HURT
BUT IF HE SPEAKS A WORD THE PERV WILL PUT HIM DEEP IN THE DIRT
DON'T BELIEVE WHAT YOU HEARD! SOME THINGS ARE MUCH WORSE
THEN GIVIN A FUCKING PERVERT WHAT HE DESERVED"


Priest:
"Have police gotten word? Are they askin away?"

Sinner:
"I can't actually say, this just happened to day"

Priest:
"Well, after you pray, here's what I want you to do
Let the Police decide the judgement for you
Serve your punishment through, then if you ever parole
Then give Jesus your heart, and give Heaven your soul
Forever your goal is just to praise him alone
Then adopt or have a baby you can raise on your own
Dedicate your life to just exist as a Dad
Give him everything you ever wish that you had
Teach him about Jesus, make him believe him
You took a life, you gotta give a life to break-even"


Sinner:
"That's all I gotta do to be clear from my sin?"

Priest:
"Yeah basically just stay and be sincere to your Kin"

Sinner:
"I hear you my friend, the game's intimidation
I seen people walk for this same situation
Like thier brain isint facin the resultin' consequence
Assumin every Human is full of Common Sense
So I owe you compliments, I aint afraid in the least
And by the way, he was a Priest"


Preist:Whoa wait!
"What's the name of the deceased, are they findin it out?
What time did you kill him?"


Sinner:
"What time-is-it-now?"


BANG! BANG!!!!


Sinner:

"Fucking child molester"
"I guess god is just a figure of my distant imagination"
 
Old 10-30-05, 06:27 PM   #10
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if you dont get my twist and concept pleae dont even let you fingers touch your keyboard to vote
 
Old 10-31-05, 03:32 PM   #11
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Ys, Im Not Gonna Be Able To Make This Man

Nice Verse And Congradulations Man.
 
Old 10-31-05, 04:05 PM   #12
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Ooh...ooh..i'll Fill In...fucking Faggots Who Voted Against Me When I Thrashed Tweety... Oooh...ooh!
 
Old 10-31-05, 06:23 PM   #13
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Ys, Im Not Gonna Be Able To Make This Man

Nice Verse And Congradulations Man.


damn bro, I was seriously looking forward to this


*takes win*

VE champion!!
 
Old 11-01-05, 11:43 AM   #14
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Ys, Im Not Gonna Be Able To Make This Man

Nice Verse And Congradulations Man.

the definition of C.S.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-02-05, 01:05 AM   #15
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congrads fam.. WINNER OF VE??

THE ONE AND ONLY WIERD (LOL) YSDAT!
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