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Wickedclown 1 16.67%
Sik Wit It 5 83.33%
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Old 05-28-05, 12:14 AM   #1
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Sik Wit It vs Wickedclown

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Old 05-28-05, 01:15 AM   #2
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Sik Wit It has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 01:15 AM.
 
Old 05-28-05, 01:30 AM   #3
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fatass homo.. he’s a cowboys fan.. & I’ll hit him w/ bricks
but the last time they won the super bowl.. was in 1996!
he was going to resurrect the 50th Brigade .. but it managed to fall
...again - & he claiming he a cowboys fan
but it shows he has the New England Patriots.. on his damn wall
u told every1 you was fat.. its off your chest now.. u should be happy
cuz my punches will leave your head spinning.. faster than your avy
okay.. u posted a picture of ur toilet .. was it really even worth it?
& in there.. is the only time Wicked is dropping shits
should’ve skipped this homo.. but he’s already next in line
so I’ll just leave this Clown’s face.. more red.. than exit signs

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everything;s pretty much self there

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Old 05-28-05, 01:32 AM   #4
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fatass homo.. he’s a cowboys fan.. & I’ll hit him w/ bricks
but the last time they won a super bowl.. was in 1996!
he was going to resurrect the 50th Brigade .. but it managed to fall
...again - & he claiming loves the cowboys
but it shows he has the New England Patriots.. on his damn wall
u told every1 you was fat.. its off your chest now.. u should be happy
cuz my punches will leave your head spinning.. faster than your avy
okay.. u posted a picture of ur toilet .. was it really even worth it?
& in there.. is the only time Wicked is dropping shits
should’ve skipped this homo.. but he’s already next in line
so I’ll just leave this Clown’s face.. more red.. than exit signs

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everything;s pretty much self there

don't get it?.. don't bother voting on this
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Old 05-28-05, 02:45 PM   #5
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Wickedclown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 02:45 PM.
 
Old 05-28-05, 02:45 PM   #6
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played ass rhymes circle like vultures in the sky
listenin to this homo net thugs makin me wanna die
like a fox im sly and its time to answer this short quiz
how u think your dope when ya rhymes are as lonely as milhouse is
call ya self Punchline champ but your just a 1 pump chump
all of RV runs ya ass more times than a leaky gas pump
it leaves me stumped thinkin, "whys this kid even try to rap"
been fucked up so many times holes as big as the cumberland gap
tales of his horrid rhymes spins round the worlds global sphere
bitch gets marched over more than an army engenier
 
Old 05-28-05, 03:34 PM   #7
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uppin this shit
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Old 05-28-05, 03:39 PM   #8
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Sik
Good Shit Man, You Had Some Decent Word Play In Here, Good Structure Had Alot Of Good Vocabulary Your Verse Was Full Of Punch Lines Which Is What Wins Battles, A Few multi's And Meta's Here And There Man Nice Shit You Had Alot Of Shit That Was Original In This Verse, Which Got You This Battle

Wicked
Damn! Lol This Was A KO Man He Got You....You Need To Change Up Your Style Man, Cuz Your Lines Are Played Out Like CD Players, Punch Lines Wasn't Hitting Man Like I Said Played, Personals Was A No No Whack Man, Vocabulary Was Shitty You Had None What So Ever, Structure Okay

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Old 05-29-05, 12:06 PM   #9
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uppin this shit
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Old 05-29-05, 01:28 PM   #10
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fatass homo.. he’s a cowboys fan.. & I’ll hit him w/ bricks
but the last time they won a super bowl.. was in 1996!
^^ wack, u dissed the cowboys
he was going to resurrect the 50th Brigade .. but it managed to fall
...again - & he claiming loves the cowboys
but it shows he has the New England Patriots.. on his damn wall
^^ agian wack... so your punch here is what? callin him a lyer.. and links are gay anyway
u told every1 you was fat.. its off your chest now.. u should be happy
cuz my punches will leave your head spinning.. faster than your avy
^^ thats a selfglorifying personal... not a punch
okay.. u posted a picture of ur toilet .. was it really even worth it?
& in there.. is the only time Wicked is dropping shits
^^ what the fuck? is that as wack as i think it is?
should’ve skipped this homo.. but he’s already next in line
so I’ll just leave this Clown’s face.. more red.. than exit signs
^^ another selfglorifying personal... not a punch
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wicked clown
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played ass rhymes circle like vultures in the sky
listenin to this homo net thugs makin me wanna die
^^vultures dont make u wanna die, they're just there if your about to die... and leading into punches like that is wack
like a fox im sly and its time to answer this short quiz
how u think your dope when ya rhymes are as lonely as milhouse is
^^weak, but a personal punch, just not good at all really
call ya self Punchline champ but your just a 1 pump chump
all of RV runs ya ass more times than a leaky gas pump
^^ first line was decent, and second had wordplay, but it didn't connect very good at all cuz that was a gay meta
it leaves me stumped thinkin, "whys this kid even try to rap"
been fucked up so many times holes as big as the cumberland gap
tales of his horrid rhymes spins round the worlds global sphere
bitch gets marched over more than an army engenier
^^ last two lines weren't good but they at least weren't selfglorfing lines

w/c wins- had less selfglorfying lines and a little bit of wordplay, and two actual personal punched that weren't slef glorifying
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Old 05-29-05, 01:30 PM   #11
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uppin this shit................ dont sleep..... by the way this wasnt my best verse ever but i owned u... your structure and rhyme scheme are horrible.... talkin all that shit before.... half of ya verse is about the dallas cowboys for fucks sake..... u suck plain and simple.... over hyped vannila ice wannabe
 
Old 05-29-05, 01:32 PM   #12
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vanilla ice? ...for one i aint white..u is........
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Old 06-02-05, 07:59 AM   #13
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Voted For: Sik Wit It

Sklriptz=Pretty Decent Verse Dawg, Few Played Concepts, But Wickedclown Had Sum Played Shit 2, So U Got Luck Wid Dat, I Felt Dat Skriptz Personals Hit ALOT Harder In Diz Battle, Good Wordpl;ay 4 Da Most Part Also. Da Patriots Line Wuz Pretty Nice But Da Best U Had 2 Offer Wuz;

''u told every1 you was fat.. its off your chest now.. u should be happy
cuz my punches will leave your head spinnin.. faster than your avy''
Pretty Decent Punch & Personal, Some Good Shit Dawg 24/50, Good Job.

WickedClown=
Very Uncreative Verse, Nuthin Hit Hard, Da Wordplay Wu Awful, Opening Bar Wuz Weak, Then Da Milhouse Personal & Playing Off Hiz Sig Wuz Used Very Uncreatively. Only Thing Dat Wuz Remotely Tite In Ya Whole Verse Wuz;

''It leaves me stimped, thinkin ''whys this guy try to rap''
been fucked up so many times holes as big as the cumberland gap''

Dat Wuz Iight But Styll Pretty Basic & Not Very Hard Hitting, Alot Ov Played & Unorigial Witless Rhymes & Punz, No Wordplay Neither =not da greatest verse dawg[no hate]= 17/50



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