here it goes

look around me..see the environment god placed me in//
Every man for themselves in a town that got laced in sin//
Crews getting homicidal over some hasty racist thing//
Won't think twice to leave a hole in the place that your face was in//
Its been ages since i seen a community stick together//
But this plague can't touch us..immunity's here forever//
Cos where im from..aint shit pretty..enjoyment we lose//
Just alcoholics, bassheads and long unemployment queue's//
I refrain from smoking woo's..stay away from drunken crews//
Tried keeping my head in school and spit to bumping tunes//
I've been in crack houses seen parents who've spoiled a lot//
Swap feeding their kids for Coca Cola bottles with the foil on top//
Babies crawling around..dodging doors falling from the hinges//
To think their first steps could catch them aids from sarynges//
A local teen murks a man unintentionally but gets respect//
Then gets trapped in this dimension that we just cannot accept//
Guys need a second chance..should be U-turns to this rocky road//
Try teaching disciplin to people who self-learnt to cock and load//
Then let the glock explode..........innocents flock or fold//
So much error in society and all the law says is 'do what you're told'//
Fuck the old..i see the future and its brighter than tomorrow//
So to the urban FRONTing line..ima fight until you follow//
Trust me i've seen shit..and i defend those rooks who get clowned//
When will the guns and hooks get put down..grab a book to get found//
Or be stuck on them staircases..grab a spoon..cook them browns//
You can write whatever in raps but is it there when you look around?//

It was decent u I give it a 6.5/10 keep elevatin

this is a decent drop . You got your flow on nice. You had nice end line rhyme's in it. 7/10.

But on a diferant note . What's that "tha god' mean in your sig. Are you god? ..lol... pz

waddup thats hot n so true ive seen way too much of that shit so i like it cuz it's real

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yo thanks for tha feed cuzz im tryn my best to elevate so holla

HOLLA fam...

that shit was D.O.P.E

nice flow, good topic u stuck to it, slick with each lines preey deep at parts where i felt where u was coming from N all around tight...

8.0 HOLLA...

V.T