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marvolousj1009 3 37.50%
MaNiPuLaTiOn 5 62.50%
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Old 08-02-04, 05:34 AM   #16
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aight...

manipulation: overall a decent verse... wordplay was kinda bordering on the lame side, except for ya personal about who he lost battles to... decent flow.. kinda basic but you were sort of trying to include multis.. punches were hit n miss

Marv: some nice original wordplay.. as always from you :P.. punches n' personals were well thought out n' hittin... flow was a tad stretched... I can tell that you rushed that verse so the stretches didnt really bother me...

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Old 08-02-04, 05:51 AM   #17
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okay good honest vote...can we get some more ppl favor's will be returned...
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Old 08-02-04, 06:13 AM   #18
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Decent battle........

Marvous......your structure was horrible, your flow was horrible, and your punches were weak, I thought with lines that long you'd at least have multies but you barely had any of those, you had no personals, nor did you have any wordplay or metaphors, this was a weak disappointing verse, I seen you drop somewhat better before, plain and simple you gotta do better

Manio........good verse, once again your strength was your wordplay and metaphors...those were nice you won this battle with those alone, good complexity...stay at it, punches were ok nothing spectacular, personals you had a few they hit but were jus average strength, your flow was good as well as your structure, you out classed him in every category

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Old 08-03-04, 08:05 AM   #19
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Old 08-04-04, 07:16 AM   #20
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Old 08-04-04, 01:59 PM   #21
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sorry manipulation he ate u not that his flow was amazin but his punches were betta sorry i cant vote for u yet not enough posts.

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Old 08-04-04, 06:28 PM   #22
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Old 08-04-04, 09:32 PM   #23
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Old 08-06-04, 08:05 PM   #24
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Old 08-07-04, 05:25 AM   #25
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whut da fukk ppl??? vote man they really need da do da 2 link thing badd on dis shit
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Old 08-09-04, 12:25 PM   #26
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Old 08-09-04, 12:51 PM   #27
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Old 08-09-04, 01:03 PM   #28
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yoo tite verses to both of yall dis was a good battle, both of yall did yall thing and i like that,


mARVOULOUS-u had nice flo and u had good punches multis but yo vocab cus of got a lot betta but u had dose punches dat hit hard as hell so u took it

Manipulation- look u had nice flo and evrythin but i really wasnt feelin yo strcutre or ur wordplay, u had sum punches but jus dint hit as hard as Marvoulous, so

v/Marvoulous

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Old 08-09-04, 02:13 PM   #29
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Except for some of the stretched lines, Marv took this one easily... not sure when this battle started but it had to be before MaNip joined hardwood... this was a weak battle for her compared to her topicals.

Marv had way more punches that hit a lot harder. multi's were there but it was hard to get a flow going because of the structure. had some nice personals in there also.


Manip... came with an old style... structure was better but punches were kinda weak... she did have a few personals but they could've been worded better to be more effective. not too much use of multi's and wordplay did minimal damage. I know she spits better than this from other posts I've read but today just wasn't her day

v/marv
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Old 08-10-04, 04:33 AM   #30
MARVOLoUsJ1009
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okay uppin wun more vote ppl stop sleepin..............................
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