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| iLL as a killers grill® |
  
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5 | 71.43% |
| ¤ÐÅž¤ |
  
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2 | 28.57% |
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06-07-05, 08:27 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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iLL as a killers grill® vs ¤ÐÅž¤
IP: 511D E1B4
TOPICAL BATTLE....topic:In The Beggining
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 10 lines cuz people hate readin tonnes of lines  Minimum posts to vote: 750 Check in by: 06-10-05 at 08:27 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Battle closed by Daz's request because iLL as a killers grill® went over 10 line limit |
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06-07-05, 08:39 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: A8D4 8C9F
10 Lines.......... Thats homo..
I needed atleast 20-30 to do what I was planning on doing.. Well heres to a shit battle.. Enjoy.. |
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06-07-05, 08:44 PM
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IP: 511D E1B4
lol......^^you said anything else man..
hmm, i thought that would level out the playing feild a lil more.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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06-07-05, 09:41 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: A8D4 8C9F
Yeah no worries man..
Its fine with me, just a little dissapointing.. I'll drop today definatly.. Kinda wanna go smoke weed before I write.. I'm buyin a fiddy after 5pm though so it wont be too long.. |
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06-07-05, 10:46 PM
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IP: 511D E1B4
¤ÐÅž¤ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-05 10:46 PM.
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06-07-05, 10:50 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 511D E1B4
In The Beginning In the beginning there were 9 wonders like an inning…smirking and grinning, Thou the earth wasn’t winning… man would cause symmetry with its sinning, Biased upon ways, we were only singular in decay…. Till religion was made, The decision was laid, the last man standing a-cross, was to pay for our trade, Now if we stand with science, its facts and belief now traveling in an alliance, Try to compromise both like mien’s …, but mines(minds)are still in defiance, Ive tried to walk the line of a purest, but it sure is, tough to see where the turn is, So I list n listen to where the cure is, but the truth seems to be the furthest … Thoughts are left doubting… while rights; are at best now joisting for sinning… Decades of thinking. ”the end”, now move on n make this your new beginning.. . ¤ÐÅž¤
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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06-08-05, 09:23 PM
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IP: B90D 1588
iLL as a killers grill® has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 09:23 PM.
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06-08-05, 09:24 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: B90D 1588
In the beginning. The aftermath slowly smokes my focus.. Who am I?, whered I come from? & Did humans transform like hokus pokus? Cause this worlds a circus's packed of un-perfect persons.. You sayin adam and eve? I'm defining our worthless purpose.. See being humans a transition stage, to be on the right page.. From flesh and bones, to being set free from a time cage.. I believe that the light rays, help us understand the immortal.. The next level, we might stay, or only dip our hands in this portal.. Wake up, you been sleeping meat head.. See we aint knee deep in the dead, our real forms aint born yet.. So would it surprise you, To hear a humans beginning was on their death bed.. Ask yourself.. |
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06-08-05, 09:31 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: B90D 1588
Lol u got text flow like a muh fucka..
Sall good....... Lets get some votes fuckers.. |
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06-08-05, 09:46 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7A28 7D1E
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nice drop poet, lol @ text flow...werd thanx bro, good luck..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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06-08-05, 11:28 PM
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This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
IP: A0C8 44A9
Damn...
Good drop by both of you...Crazy Flows.. |
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06-09-05, 12:22 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: D1BF FA16
Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤
NoS.... nice quick drop.... structure was nice, the idea for the topic was a good one and you had a nice approach to it.....ya stayed on point throughout, the whole verse flowed well from beginning to end.....i think the strongest points to ya verse were the opener and closer....i liked the 'hocus pocus' line cuz it fitted well and it was kinda funny.....the closer was dope.....especially the very last line, a real good point ya made right there......vocabs in the verse were nice, nuthin real basic except for the end.....nice imagery and feeling in ya verse.......overall 7.5/10 DaZ.... a good drop.... structure was pretty much flawless....lines were stretched but you threw in the multies to help the whole verse flow real well still....stayed on point throughout....nice depiction of the topic to....i especially likeed the 2nd bar...also your closer was tight to, i liked the whole 'move on and make new beginning' that tied in well to finish off the verse...some nice vocabs in there, nuthin real basic and you had some decent wordplay in the verse to......overall 8/10 V/ - Daz
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06-09-05, 12:36 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: B90D 1588
Well I'm gonna keep my mouth shut about that one..
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Yo my bad dude, text flow isnt a good thing,.. It means you stretch your lines for structure and makes flow sound real goofy on audio.. Just an obervation..But yeah, goodluck.. |
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06-09-05, 01:34 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤
[CENTER] Aight Check It.. Daz: Your Rhyme Scheme In This Seemed A Little Overpowering Which Made The Read Not As Smooth...but Your Vocabulary Was Decent. With Ten Lines You Did Pretty Decent To Get Your Point Across and Put In Some Nice Lines. I Like The Line About Jesus...That Was Nicely Set Up. Nostradamus: I Felt Your Piece Fasho, but Your Piece Was More of A Poetical Drop and I Feel That Your Style and Direction With Your Piece Didn't Really Get To Me As A Topical Set Up Like Daz's Did. Your Emotion Through Verbals Was Hot, but Your Imagery and Direction Wasn't There. Just Seemed Like A Person Who Was Confused With His Civialization....If This Was Poetry You Definitly Woulda Won. Vote = Daz For Better Topical Written Drop. ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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06-09-05, 01:50 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 7A28 7D1E
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werd, i guess the difference is i dont write my text for audio.. but i guess your right i do stretch text at times... .
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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