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Old 05-04-08, 08:56 PM   #1
the kid nate
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d523 vs the kid nate

IP: 4D99 DE77

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Check in by: 05-07-08 at 08:56 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed... asking for votes


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Old 05-04-08, 08:57 PM   #2
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Old 05-04-08, 08:59 PM   #3
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Old 05-04-08, 10:17 PM   #4
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Ill T.K.Nate Like I Was Mike Tyson, I’m Always Lyrically Killin
And, The Only Time You’d Drop Hard Was If You Jumped Off A Buildin
Get Stomped N Chomped, Someone Needs to Get This Imposter dropped
Bitch You Work At Stop & Shop, The Only Thing You Push Is Shoppin Carts
Don’t Take Much To Kill This Cat, I Spit So Sharp, My Words Can Scar A Mic
I Can’t Blame Him For Suckin, “Kids” Aren’t Supposed To Know What Bars Are Like
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Old 05-04-08, 11:31 PM   #5
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look this cat talken shit imma rob him
find out were his crib at wit my niggas plottin
jackpot.. mansion...guns out cock it
burner to his face "were ur cash at..wallet?"
now i got the cash imma place it in my pocket
shit would be suttin like direct deposit (derek deposit)

we all no imma kid but no father is needed for safety
i got twin brothers that are closley related to me
both ages 4 and they dont like to listen ( two 44's)
they will remove the skin from ur head like a circumcision

u should be embarrassed wit these RV sessions
rappen like u needed to take 100,000 lessons
im coming out wit weapons
m16's and a bible
give u time to count ur blesses
read a line or two and ill come around in seconds

na man fuck clappen u i rather come through and give dap to u
but u so bitch the impact leave ur whole arm black and blue
and if my fist is attacking u
ur bitch jaw will crack in 2
bc u cant handle this cross over jab
from an online rap my dude

and yea boy the white boy is in the house
but ur mom kept her mouth closed when my white boys were in her mouth (my cum)

yeaa
my raps make u wanna stomp ur feet and pat ur fist
cuz u still in the crib on the computer or playen madden bitch
while im on the road getting signed on that rapping shit
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Old 05-05-08, 02:37 PM   #6
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someone vote please!!!

thanks...

~the kid nate
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Old 05-05-08, 05:35 PM   #7
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Voted For: D523

one sided battle really.

Nate, whats going on with you my man? That was some lame ass rambling on garbage brother. Instead of actually sitting down and just typing, seen as its text you have the option to read through it, edit it, add lines, add a punch. You need to elevate on metaphores, punchlines, personals and attacking your opponent with some original caos that sends him a nice L.

What you have just dropped is plain garbage brother. Im not hating, but If I hid the truth you wouldnt elevate would you? Just look into learning meta's, concepts and personals.

D523, your verse is ok, Im guessing you knew you didnt have to drop solid against your opponent. Few ok punches, buit nothing great. Verse is good enough for the Win though.

Ok battle
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