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07-04-06, 02:28 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Xtasy
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its a written freestyle... blah..blah...blah.. Yes the beat is old and maybe played and so on...I KNOW!!! as for the rest...tel me...tell me...tell me!!! Xtasy WOOOOO TITO REST THE CLICK....!!! bLAYbOY SPUL umm..cant rememba d name...duh wun
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07-04-06, 06:31 PM | #2 | |||||
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It's not a freestyle if it's written, it's a freeverse
anyway your flow was pretty good, nice and smooth and one thing I noticed your quality was better and you actually sounded like yourself. I'm not sure if that was the effects of you being pined or if you was just trying harder but w/e. Your emotion was decent I see some nice lines in there. good lyrics gurl, overall decent...the beat was poppy but you should start grabbin beats for yourself instead of downloadin em off limewire. rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231062 just leave feed though you heard it already, thanks 1
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07-04-06, 06:36 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Listenin'..haa you tipsy wish I was on msn when you was doing this..quality aint great but your flow is pretty nice..lyrics are good...you still need that confidence but that'll come..qualityy kinda mkes it hard to hear you but still this was pretty funny..ahhaa at the give it to me haha...multis are decent..pretty generic track.fun trakc..1
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07-05-06, 06:05 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: D206 FC92
okay...thanx
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rotfl..lmao...mayne lime wire is the nearest!!! i thought i said it that it was a written stuff??!! ahh thanx anyways
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07-05-06, 06:59 AM | #5 | ||||
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this aint bad....beat of course is hot.....your flow is okay......you need too upp your emotion and delivery the way you say ur words cuz iono it just wasn't right....do that and u'll be a lot better....other then that not bad
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07-06-06, 01:44 AM | #6 | ||||
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written freestyle... NO COMMENT... I dont like the cadence on the track ... it just sound like u not that into it... The lyrics was aiight... like they said pretty generic track... LMAO @ "aahhh I'm fuckin happy" where are u from ... i cant put my finger on the accent... when u spelled ya name it reminded me of Roxanne Shante. but yea the talkin in between was coo...it was just too much at times...
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07-06-06, 01:47 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 13FF 9487
nice beat word, flow is pretty dope, i just dont like the bells in the beat, quality is not bad, you dont sound tipsy lol, pretty nice spitting, freeverse? woord, good drop, your best that ive listened to so far seriously, lyrics are not like woooww but still good
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07-06-06, 06:59 AM | #8 | ||||||
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lol i was reading so i had to concerntrate a lil..
thanx a lot anyways Fendi i'm a Nigerian living in Italy!!
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07-06-06, 12:38 PM | #9 | ||||
Hell yeah
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07-06-06, 06:28 PM | #10 | ||||
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I'm a Liberian Living In America
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07-06-06, 09:41 PM | #11 | |||||||
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not sure of the point of this song...but, the beat is common
flow is aiight quality seems good tho str8...but nothing major here 1 |
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07-07-06, 01:17 PM | #12 | |||||||
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Damn, never did like this beat....or song for that matter. first verse the flo is perfectly on just nothing attention grabbing about the words. Your voice came out pretty nice though second verse sounded like you were a little more unsure of the flo here. Lesbo line and retard caught my ear but i don't know why. Talking is a bit bothersome but i can't really say shit cause i have a track now where i talk for a minute. it's proly only bothering me because youre drunk. Pretty decent track. I been meaning to hit you up for a collab that is...when you're sober. I'll be back with a link later. peace 6.5/10
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07-08-06, 06:23 PM | #13 | ||||||
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^lol..sure!
thanx y'all for the feeds!!! come on rv....
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07-08-06, 06:36 PM | #14 | ||||
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haha this one of those, i dont give a shit if u like it im just havin fun type tracks
freeeeeverse, i'd have to give u mad props if this was an actual freestyle. lyrics were decent, iunno why peeps keep sayin u need to show more emotion, sounded good to me =/ coo delivery, quality's good, beat is nice of course. bla feelin it, pz
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07-08-06, 11:28 PM | #15 | ||||||
Whys That?
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yeh this is ok, but check RV's history pages, i hold it down for the drunk freestyles.
But yeh, you said you wrote this so its all good. |
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