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Old 08-23-04, 03:01 AM   #1
RyeDogg87
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"my color" feedback....

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real story about someone i know...gettin this shit off my chest, all keyed

You can love me or hate me cuz at the end it won't matter/
If you would ever take a bullet for me shit i'm most flattered/
Most defintely i've been rejected for most of my life/
Injected from the rest, enduring this strife/
Is it my color or my religion?, sometimes it's hard bein a christian/
Atheists think they got it easy they don't know what they're missen/
Nigga got a problem u fuckin tell me like a man/
You givin me attitude n lip cuz I gave u my helpin hand?/
Trained you from the ground up, even though I never give a fuck/
But cuz my color ain't yours u gotta bitch n strut/
I hear shit behind my back, mumbles from this coward/
A man that don't speak up is a man without mind power/
Seperation cuz we come from different lives/
He workin for a goal I can see the determination in his eyes/
Momma musta raised a fool, brought up to hate colors as long as it don't belong to you/
Contradicting bob marley instead of one love there's two/
Blamin me for bein ignorant, pointin fingers at the innocent/
Guilty as charged for bein uneducated, its just my color u hatin/
Interracial relationships is a sin in ur eyes, just ur color ur datin/
It's like cold war, everyone's fightin but the progress is unknown/
This fuckin racism won't stop until Jesus comes and takes us home
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Old 08-23-04, 07:59 AM   #2
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it's alright some of the bars are alittle uneven kinda not making the flow what it could be, the rhymings kinda basic too but overall it's a pretty good peice i'd give it 6.5/10
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Old 08-23-04, 11:12 AM   #3
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no doubt man good lookin
ya it needs some work, keyed that shit
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Old 08-23-04, 11:15 AM   #4
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Naw Naw, That Waz Nice, I've Seen People Post Shit Thats ALOT Worse, Keep Doin Ya Thang Mayn n As Long As You Keepin It Real Then Cant Nobody Touch You, Good Lookin, Holla !!1!!
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Old 08-24-04, 02:21 AM   #5
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yea i agree with Shottaboi up there i' have seen alot worse! Keep it up good drop
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