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Old 03-02-09, 07:47 PM   #1
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Light Weight Title Match: Final 1-0 .vs Alpha 2-0

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Monday Morning: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Final 1 bar
Thursday: Alpha 2 bars
Friday: Final 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Night Close

Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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Old 03-03-09, 04:20 PM   #2
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check .
 
Old 03-03-09, 07:08 PM   #3
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yep .
 
Old 03-04-09, 11:35 PM   #4
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Alpha eats three courses a day with 15 snacks inbetween
This fatass' Fork Lift's more then any sort of heavy machine
 
Old 03-05-09, 04:38 PM   #5
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Your a fag dude, and in scripture, it says the shits wack
But u can tell ya bitch its ^ when ya Leviticus my nutsack
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I'm a bully bitch, & your fucking tiny, so dont bring the attitude
cuz you belittle so much now..I'm ALWAYS afraid i'll step on you
 
Old 03-05-09, 07:17 PM   #6
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i won't feed,
i'll still to the topic cus its true. this kids a fuckin freak
cus alpha feeds enough to play off of every punch dropped this week
 
Old 03-05-09, 07:30 PM   #7
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eh, this one wasnt really all that good.

basically i think this came down to finals first punch...and alphas second punch
i wasnt really feeling either of your other punches...alpha i dont know if i just dont
get ya first punch completely..but it just dont hit to me...like the wordplay just seemed force...i still dont get the Leviticus part...i broke it down in every syllable..and it still dont make sense...leviticus my nutsack...like i hear the kiss part. i guess but i dk this just wasnt good to me..final, your 2nd punch was wack man...feeding is allowed in this league..so its pointlesss what your saying. unless, your just corresponding with your first punch...referring to him eating/ and the fatass concept...then which i guess its ook..


v/this ones tough...shiit i guess i got final on this one. by a lil bit.
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Old 03-05-09, 07:33 PM   #8
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I think his punch was Leave it to kiss? but i could be wrong so dont base your vote off of my oppinion.

and it was meant to play off my 1st punch. if this is swaying. please delete it.
 
Old 03-05-09, 07:37 PM   #9
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Alpha eats three courses a day with 15 snacks inbetween
This fatass' Fork Lift's more then any sort of heavy machine
this was kinda clever wording was ok but still wasn't a huge punch




Your a fag dude, and in scripture, it says the shits wack
But u can tell ya bitch its ^ when ya Leviticus my nutsack
worded bad but ok

I'm a bully bitch, & your fucking tiny, so dont bring the attitude
cuz you belittle so much now..I'm ALWAYS afraid i'll step on you
kinda like grade 1 wordplay, real basic and predictable


i won't feed,
i'll still to the topic cus its true. this kids a fuckin freak
cus alpha feeds enough to play off of every punch dropped this week
this was bad, feeding is allowed and makes a dope battle so I don't see this a punch especialy in this league


Final by a tiny bit, not a huge battle.
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Old 03-05-09, 10:26 PM   #10
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Alpha eats three courses a day with 15 snacks inbetween
This fatass' Fork Lift's more then any sort of heavy machine
this was cute wordplay and a decent punch




Your a fag dude, and in scripture, it says the shits wack
But u can tell ya bitch its ^ when ya Leviticus my nutsack
eh, didnt flip it too well.

I'm a bully bitch, & your fucking tiny, so dont bring the attitude
cuz you belittle so much now..I'm ALWAYS afraid i'll step on you
basic wordplay, coulda came harder.


i won't feed,
i'll still to the topic cus its true. this kids a fuckin freak
cus alpha feeds enough to play off of every punch dropped this week
eh wasnt feelin this one at all.


Alpha i dont think you cmae your hardest here, i've seen a lot better from you and with that being said

I'm giving this to Final for the first line he spit

vote final.
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Old 03-05-09, 07:39 PM   #11
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lol. people don't get it. but it's okay. :]
 
Old 03-05-09, 07:48 PM   #12
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it's good, you'll win this.. you got the first vote lol.
 
Old 03-05-09, 07:50 PM   #13
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^lol that dont mean shit. you know that alpha lol, i get it. i mean thats what i figured it said. but overall its still worded badly. Great concept though
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Old 03-05-09, 08:44 PM   #14
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Alpha, this aint R/B

we dont chain vote

we actually read things, and try to digest the bars and think about what it is that made one person drop better

Alpha, your bars, although they have better wordplay, dont hit, at all agasint him

the word play isn't agasint him, or anything bout him, making your bar's ineffective.

Final barley won

so vote: Final
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Old 03-05-09, 08:51 PM   #15
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No chains here...

solid battle, but I'm only gunna go with alpha on this one cuz the bible and leviticus one, it was a good attempt on a wordplay

final idk i guess i wasnt really feelin your punches

v/ Alphabetized just barely though...
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