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02-17-05, 05:23 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Ode to tha rudest muthafucka.......................ME!
IP: 1D24 6DE1
Aeyo....I hate my Life...and tha way that everything Remains alike/
Monotonous experiences....uncured, given me tha Rage to fight/ Growing up without any friends...my mother said I may ignite/ she's right...and now here I am age of 18...a Bastard day and night/ Lets say $eed's quite tha Egocentric guy...I'll tell a chick to die/ Flip tha bird....and use Obscene names until tha Bitches cry/ Listen...Im tha scrooge at Christmas...bias with Rude Intentions/ Violent...I've used my fists with a Pious polluted Tension/ I lie and make Cruel decisions......tha guy that Refused to Listen/ Inside of a school....cause kids then were Silent to me, I wish then/ that i would be sent to Really....i never ever had any Motives/ tha Pressure that built Inside of me sent me through a Lack of focus/ Now im back and Hopeless, an Asshole...and when trash Approaches/ Regardless of who it is.....I'll even run up and Smack tha homeless/ My acts are potent...I look at people Now like a Pack of Roaches/ ....fuck tha world and everyone in it....they suffer from Haletosis/ I crashed a moment....regained my strength...basically I stayed awake/ Remained insane...but Kept myself from Toungue kissing a Razor blade/ Day to Day my anger flames....my Mind burns with hatred/ My pass was a Girl thats naked...open for tha whole World to rape it/ Twirled and anxious...now my head is known to quickly Spin and Roam/ ....With a motion thats so tense,..its been known to Bend a comb/ Listen yo....If $ick goes....and I get a Hold of my Breath/ I'll get a Grip on Reality so Hard....I'd probably Choke it to death/ Im open to stress....tha Biggest asshole tha World has to offer/ Im not apologizing...shit!.....I dont even respect my Father!!!!/ You cant neglect this author....So as I cuss and spit it Lingers/ But since this is Text....close your Eyes and picture my Middle finger..... Scream at me.... drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 Last edited by intensify effect : 02-18-05 at 07:58 AM. |
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02-17-05, 10:36 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 7D11 8CB8
aight ya shit was pretty dope but take some advice....
try to make it a lil shorter cuz when people see how long it is, right off the bat they not gonna want to sit there and read sumtin very long But i liked it so keep it up jus remember to make ya next short and sweet
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02-18-05, 07:57 AM | #3 | |||
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IP: A1EC 8B20
drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 |
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02-20-05, 08:01 PM | #4 | ||||||||
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IP: 1D24 6DE1
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