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10-21-04, 01:39 AM | #1 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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Check Ins Must Be In By Friday Or Your Topic Wont Be Given... If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About... Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday... 15 to 30 lines no crew votes no hate votes no d/r votes goodluck TOPIC: Broken Home
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10-21-04, 04:52 PM | #2 | |||
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check check..............
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10-22-04, 12:30 AM | #3 | ||||
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Checkin in here
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10-25-04, 12:04 AM | #4 | |||
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
The faint sound of a slap travels throughout his home
as he prepares himself for yet another day all alone Trapped inside of this cage, his parents barely acknowledge him no knowledge of the real world, his parents path is what hes following props himself up, seated on his stain covered carpet drug abusing father so his mind cluttered with garbage only 3 rooms in his house, living room, bathroom and kitchen only educated bout 3 thingsoverty, drugs and sinning grooggy eyed he looks in the mirror and recgonizes only a simple child abused kid with no hope or potential turns the knob on the faucet a brown substance is released deceased rodents on the floor avoinds contact with his feet strolls sluggishly in the kitchen his stomach is growling loudly surrounded by parents howling, hes ducking fists flying cowardly skips his meal to go in his room so hes not disturbed from scrbbling words, this is his feeling of like a bird this is his freedom from reality the soothing of his mind describing life while jotting down a few sentences that rhyme doubts all his ability, could he make it on his own? hardly so he applies the lyrics that he creates to his family on RV |
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10-25-04, 03:29 AM | #5 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
sab wins
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