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05-04-05, 09:06 PM | #1 | ||||||
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1x to the joint
IP: 4A3C 316E
want critique on this:
So you wanna be a star??.. let me make you blink have thoughts of throwing winks at god... for an asylum; cause if he fall to hell.. you know i'm gona find im let me know wat u think??
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05-05-05, 02:13 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 8B7B DE28
not bad at all!
2nd line could of been worked a little better... don't get me wrong i'm still a newbie on here... just giving honest option |
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05-05-05, 02:15 PM | #3 | |||||
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critique this....
IP: 8B7B DE28
give me some feedback...
just a short little punch... Your from the "Dirty" ya aint so fresh and clean... ya texts are so "thrownback" got me thinkin' ya got a "time machine" |
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05-05-05, 02:20 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 8B7B DE28
Radizaim your flows are weak they my head hurt,
got me thinking you gave me a brain "aneurysm" sorry man, no hate, your fam, that wasnt even a good hit... give me a hit back when you get a chance |
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05-06-05, 10:47 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 4A3C 316E
aight ,aight catch it ........
your flows like H2O "hot-to-off", just a second rate nock off in the front line hide the "self" don't want ya essence in the presence of a menace strip ya soul to adolesence
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radizaim // PESSIMIZIM IS THE MEKANISM OF REALITIES ALGORITHMS //// |
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05-07-05, 08:58 AM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 6645 381F
ya thinking your gonna take this win, nigga i'm "native" to this son
this ain't a "rain dance" its called beating you in this battle like a "war drum"
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There's a lot of talk about whos the hottest, to be honest
hip-hop aint been the same since Tupac moved to Cuba on us! |
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05-07-05, 11:40 AM | #8 | |||||
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^^^ your lost post Radiziam was hot
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There's a lot of talk about whos the hottest, to be honest
hip-hop aint been the same since Tupac moved to Cuba on us! |
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05-07-05, 07:16 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 4A3C 316E
Haha Funny .....................
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