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11-15-03, 01:47 PM | #1 | |||||||
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These cats'll get killed-thru-the-wire..constantly hatin cuz of my ethnicity yet my skills-are-admired,
Ain't stoppin to fulfill-my-desires..the detest just makes me stronger..adding more fuel-to-the-fire// A hungry student of the art..they soon discover that for Hip Hop I possess devotion-like-no-other, These notions-I-just-smother...cats focusing on my background don't know emotion-has-no-color// It's obvious they're becoming weary-of-my-plans...my persistence they're fearing-in-this-man, Haters always appearin-in-a-glance..I'ma keep spittin..don't need anyone cheerin-in-the-stands// Insecure minds fear that Hip Hop should stay black...no doubt I'm hittin-these-vultures, With precision-to-halt-the haters that say I'm stealin the art..not aware I'm enrichin-the-culture// Dealin with this...the weak would be broken-in-tears..various stereotypes I've been copin-for-years, I'm just hopin-u-hear wut I gotta say...disregard my appearance..close ur eyes and open-ur-ears// My passion flows relentlessly...these haters with faggot tendencies will never get the best-of-me, I suffer from Hip Hop dependancy...expression of these lyrics seems to be my lone remedy// I hold-the-sound of pure Hip Hop..these cats are obviously jealous I know-these-clowns, Constant efforts to stop me are useless...like a 'GAS PEDAL'..too dangerous to hold-me-down// My skill has been known-by-few..this hatred I block out..all this negative noise-aint-new, Like 'KEEPIN SCORE OF REPLIES'..these words I speak are aimed to change ur 'POINT'-a-'VIEW'// Droppin knowledge regarding my ethnicity...its about time I set it straight-for-these-queers, Recognize the talent..I'm makin-it-clear...I've now realized these cats only hate-what-they-fear// Which is an Asian MC..who can weave-these-letters..who can rock the mic as good or even-better, They think spittin is all about fame...I do it from the heart don't matter if I'm ever seein-cheddar// THis Goes out For-Nitro and el veterano....... GhosT |
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11-15-03, 01:55 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 1EF3 B72A
I want some feed-back on what i said...and i want Nitro,especially,to read this....So Gimmie the feed-Back....GhosT
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11-15-03, 02:05 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 1EF3 B72A
YO....Whats really good Peeps???...NO feed baCc....Show some love and tell me what u think....Be honest,JUdge my shit.....1
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11-15-03, 02:12 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 1EF3 B72A
YOoooO-YoooOOOOoooo.....Gimmie some feed-BaCC here.....be honest.....Tell me straight Up.....1
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11-15-03, 02:14 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 7B47 7A87
I really liked everything you said in this piece, how you discribed that you hunger the art of hip hop, and speaking about nothing being able to hold you back, and the fact kats only hate what you fear....I could relate to this and what you were trying to express, keep up the good work!
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11-15-03, 02:18 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 1EF3 B72A
Thanks Man....I try to keep it real....Gimmie some more feed-BacC....and While u guys are at it....Check out my other peice(its on open mic aswell)....Called 'abc slaughter'.....Thnx again....1
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11-15-03, 04:08 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: ED36 AAFF
nice piece..... i liked it........good topic
return the favor and check out my open mic piece http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92075 thanks yo
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11-15-03, 04:15 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 19AF 50C1
it was good no doubt but some lines were real lame
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11-25-03, 08:49 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 9DA6 C725
yo dat was vicuis son
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11-26-03, 02:02 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 19AF 50C1
its a strong drop i cant see why it was slept on i'll upp it though
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