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03-22-04, 03:35 PM | #1 | |||||||
Suspended: Cheating
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strait freestyle check it out
IP: C1DA C961
on tha hip i hold 8 like aikman/
in tha clip i hold 20 like peyton/ im bout to let hot shit start fires like satan/ u can get your chest fried like bacon/ and u can catch it early/ i got gats that'll throw bullets like testerverty/ get smacked in your chest get thirty/ damn right them texas birdies/ |
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03-22-04, 04:20 PM | #2 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 047D 3076
ummm...not realy long enough dawg....nice try for anewb....try loner words and lines....make it more complex...use mulit' to make it dope...as i sed not bad for your first go bro...but u gota try to mix up da wordplay and advance on da vocab....yo coment on some open mics.....then you will see ways in witch to make dis beta...nice try ...pz
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03-22-04, 04:20 PM | #3 | ||||
....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: C1DA C961
it was alright wasnt really good
punches wernt good is this a sports freestyle or something gangsta one love...... |
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03-22-04, 04:32 PM | #4 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
hey im gonna tell you right you aint got shit yep the next master p is talking to you
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03-22-04, 04:44 PM | #5 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
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hey you wanna hear a real freestyle. here it comes Gunit beats all of you fake ass punks theres no one that could beat me when you see me comin you all know what to do duck cause you dont wanna be the goose im the lyric master you all are fake you eminem niggas wanabe i know you probably think this aint my best freestyle but remeber me when im selling all my records im the next master p |
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