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Old 02-25-05, 12:59 PM   #1
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Gyea boiz n girlz i got some trax i want ya'll to hear

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chekk out all da trax my most recent songz are tha ones at tha top holla!!
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Old 02-26-05, 06:49 AM   #2
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ight im listening to the track get off...omg this sound bad fam...your emotion needs work your delivery i dont like your over dubs there 2 damn loud...flow need work...omg that hook lmao @ this..it's funny i know its not suppose to be though..are u rhymeing over a beat wit a tag? u need a pop filter yea basically u need elevation in every asepct keep elevating props on work...


ps. u got lil kids screaming in the background or something?
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Old 02-26-05, 08:05 AM   #3
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Just like cali.....you need to work on writing 2 the beat........i listend to your first solo track.....idk what it was....it was ehh ok if you just startin..........it was regular.....word.....man you need to work on ya lyrics.....emotion and flow.....work on how to write syllables to a beat.....sounds like u just recorded it and didnt even hear what u were saying.......
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Old 02-26-05, 09:06 AM   #4
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i'm listening to how you want...

bliss- delivery needs some work fam...boring delivery dont sound like you comfortable on the mic...flow was ok...feel off a couple times...breathe control problems...lyrics fit the topic...


diss- flow was aight...delivery needs work too same the other guy...lyrics were coo...


aight overall i wasn't really feeling this track to heavy fellas keep spittin aight. elevation is coming...peace
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