Whats it take to be famous? ummm nice beats, nice hooks
its even easier for the bitches, they just need nice looks
Ill throw books & magazines then stick them fools in a crapper
add cars, bitches and gunshots, and you got the makin of a rapper
so batter up fools, as I pitch a punch aimed in your direction
I watch a music video these days and all I get is an erection
No vibe, no soul, just one goal and thats to make money
Losin their roots on the way to the bank, how can they find that funny?
I dont care that their wrist is Bright, Id rather hear a dope rhyme
let em make their moms proud, thats the real definition of sunshine
just one time i wanna hear a line with some deeper thoughts
Instead of some dumb niggas boastin about losin money in court!
where I'm from ya give to the poor, and stop bein so Greedy
watch me lock these rappers in my bars and start feedin the needy
it seems ya dont need talent, and everybodys gettin signed
whats sad is even them whiteboys on mtv got the industry out rhymed

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Im just startin to get in the Swing of usin Keys for a bar
& how ironic im throwin them same keys in your mommas Jar!

a bit simple but base on true stuff hip-hop is kinda dead and videos are base on sexy ass hoes in bikini suits but i aint complaing about them thou lol...
you def have potential pick it up a bit and get more creative or LIKE MY FAVORIT THING TO DO IS GO STRAIGHT RAW.....

but not bad for your first drop....

ye i tried to be a little bit diffrent with my approach, not really sure it worked but ill be droppin all diffrent type of styles, so thanks for the feedback on my peice man

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Im just startin to get in the Swing of usin Keys for a bar
& how ironic im throwin them same keys in your mommas Jar!