Iight we gonna do a .......10-16 lines verse
house rules

Verse due 1 day after check in

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alright thats cool.. i dont know if i will be on time tho...but its cool... i guess im checking in....

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repping 8th disciples...



record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

Alright killa this battles gonna be one big knock-out
Your just a big stain that I will remove cause I got “shout”
Bitch you called me out thinking I was scared
You couldn’t beat me nigga if your lines was squared
Killcamflow hahaha more like killa-cant-flow
You didn’t think I was competition “o you didn’t know”
Im like the energizer bunny cause I keep going
My lines are crazy while urs aint even flowing
Alright killa you think your hard cause u from da roc
Well from what I heard nigga’z from their like da cock
Listen no disrespect to the roc… its just killa is a little weak
You thought I was just some newb while my game is so unique
Bitch you think you throw punches like some championship fighter
Well listen here you just got beat by a caucasion and I couldn’t be whiter
Sooo im gonna end this battle with one big closer…
You think u a rapper you just ONE BIG POSER

alright i did that in like ten minutes when i have a day to do it so think about that when u vote on this... this isnt my best but hopefully it gets the job done... alright soo we are just waitin for killa now

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repping 8th disciples...



record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

I put my head into this project and i set off the Bombs//
I only got a little Time to get ready to Detnate theser Rhymes//
Killa got mad respect for ya reddot,in this verse wasnt trying to Hurt ya//
You sayed this gonna be 1 big Knock out,i guess im just gonna have to Murk ya//
Really fuck ya whole crew ya only got lost 1 battle im giving you ya second Loss//
Fucking going through the middleman or Co-Leader im gonna come straight for ya Boss/
This aint going ot be the first tiem u lost to someone wit skillz ya lost to Don//
Ya need to ConCentrate on wat my state of Mind and Killing anger was Set Upon//
All ur doing with this battle si Pumping me up and Bumping ur winnings Down//
This gonna be a Ghost Town battle,im gonna float above while ur gonna Drown//
My verse is making ya shake and Turn ya,killa gonna set ya on fire and Burn ya//
After u seen ym wordplay in this battle it started to shake and Concern Ya//


Iight wrote this bout 15 mins....just a little somethin.....let see who wins

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killa= Ima give this one to you cuz ya punches stood out to me. You can work on ya structure though cuz ya lines are strectched out. Try to use betta wordplay too.

Reddot= I aint give this to you cuz ya punches really didnt do nothing special.
Bitch you called me out thinking I was scared
You couldn’t beat me nigga if your lines was squared
^^^^^^^^ I didnt understand that one. So work on ya punches and maybe you could have wont this one.

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[.Diabolic:.]

Return the favor please.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129243

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my vote gotta go to killa, better punchlines, but your lines were a little stretched.
reddot, your rhymed an everything but your punchlines werent to big. but return the favor,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129719
thx, Peace.

i gotta go wit killa to betta punches
killa you ready to battle yet man?
o an return tha favor an vote on mah battles. pc

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Fam if ya going ot vote on this battle ya gotta give full explained votes...really come on

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nigga give me an explanation on why da fuck you keep runnin from me when i b askin ya punk ass to battle, explain dat killacantflow.

seriously explain your votes.. and i dont think killa's verse was better than mine.. his verse was good but come on... but ya'll the voters..so get to voting

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repping 8th disciples...



record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

red won this easy with rhymes dat were amazing and I was just reading the punches from him and they were fantastic, they hit hard and came acorss nicely, aswell as the nice structure and flowed consistantly and just had a better performace in lyrics wrote in the verse.

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yo im going with red on this one i think his rhymes were better decent punches.... killa your shit was good too but i just htink that red got this one. good flow man

good battle

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check out these battles:

me vs westbankahradah

me vs froboy

this was a close battle. both rhymes coulda been improved but i gotta go wit killacamflow. Reddot was pretty ill to begin wit, wit lines like "stain and shout" and "killa-cant-flow" but towards da end u startin gettin to simple wit lines like "da cock"...thats one of da most played out rhymes ive ever heard.

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