house rules 6-8 lines verse due by 12:15

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My Lines Are ILL yo

nigga i dont know why u called me out ur gonna get wasted
you biting my rhymes the best u did u copied and pasted..

you havent seen the best cause im not even trying...
you just started on rb but your skills are already dying..

you never had a chance stepping to the all around great one
soo im gonna end this battle saying just doing my job.. hope you had fun....

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My Lines Are ILL yo

say rookie take notes i got team full of micbreakers and servin them up is the coach i lost my grill u wanna know how much cost a nigga found pawn and bought his self a house. ... uh uh oh oh hoes be like damn nigga swole nigga i can pull yo gal if i had chili bowl servin them and the wreckin crew if hatin the fuck u i got tired of poppin trunk so i bought a truck too pockets fat like fat joe in niggas head micwrecker hero grab fans like c-lo ihat fuckin with fake gangsters cause they aint nuttin but wanksta people that know me know that im a big banksta money up and down my bodie this nigga think he gone wit out gettin any votes from nobody

c'mon fam dont sleep on this lets please get some votes..

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My Lines Are ILL yo

servin i hate how you write, u always cheatn the limit that way, u dont have bars, or any way of showing lines.

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aight GEN took dis one hands down... although i didnt like the fact that it was so short... 6-8 lines just aint enough... any way... GEN tool this one with better personals and punches and the fact that servin's structure was off... no offence tho man, no hate.. just my honest opinion... good battle both of you, to short tho....

VOTE-GEN

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16 KOs 19 WINS

genicide took this wit better punches and personals, i liked the flow of his verse..

nigga i dont know why u called me out ur gonna get wasted
you biting my rhymes the best u did u copied and pasted..
^i liked that bar, but this battle was too short to have good flow and punches

servin them up, u had choppy flow and ur punches didnt hit..no hate

v/gen

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Wooo... This is the weirdest battle i've ever seen =\

Servin them up: YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO ELEVATE! You don't even have lines to begin with. You're rhymes don't even rhyme or go together. No punchlines at all, you are only spittin' wordz. Work on everything.

Overall: 3/10

Genocide: The only reason why you got my vote is because you had some good punchlines.

nigga i dont know why u called me out ur gonna get wasted
you biting my rhymes the best u did u copied and pasted..
I liked this one. Wasn't as great but did damage.

Overall: 7/10

v/ genocide

Both of these verses were pretty weak. Like otha doos said, this battle was kinda short. I didnt like servin em cuz his was hard ta follow throughout the whole flow. Gen came with better punches and actually had a structure to his rhymes. Servin em: you gotta fix ya structure up.

Vote - Genocide

Vote on mines...Links r in tha sig..

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