Yea, the chorus is iffy but out of all the takes this is the best I got. Holla back youngins.

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left feedback on itz our livez and t-wests track

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typin as I listen........DMX beat is nice........
k hook is kinda wack...quality is net average..ur flow is on beat...i aint feelin how u goin up wid ur voice on some words like "ta-^boo"...lyrically its decent nuttin terribly incredible lol but deres sum nice lines in dis, i like tha way u switch up ur rhymeschemes yo...deep track tho, a lot of emotion conjured n shit...i reckon this track would b dope wid improved quality and a betta hook cos ur actual spit is nice...Peace man...RTF - links in sig

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Hook ehhh...Your on point with the beat....Some nice lyrics...I like the Concept thou

Overall: Keep Coming

this beat is mad old but wasnt really use theres a reason for that the beats garbage your quality is 100000000 times better then i heard from you so far lyrically is good you need to step up your emotion this is a emotional song but you came bland on it hook is good but you shouldve mixed it was diffrent or had someone else mix it flow is good on it just get your emotion toghther and your presence will take time but overall with a little work this can be good 5/10

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

heh

Bumpism.

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Yes, I'm On That Old School Shit

hook is wak. dont sing..it dont sound good.
you sound old school, which isnt bad. Your emotion needs to be more present. your flow on this is choppy.
change the hook.it sucks.. nice beat.

definitly sounds old school though..olds chool flow or somthing