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07-27-04, 01:23 PM
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T-West - "Unbroken Silence..."
IP: 51F8 9483
Titled: Unbroken Silence...
Author: T-West Sunlight hits my window, I'm awaken to birds... Chirping words...easily, the sweetest thing I've ever heard Walk over, and I smile...an amazin' sensation... The World in my eyes...God's great creation The grass is really green, n' nobody seems frighten' No punches...bunches are huggin' instead of fightin' this is excitin'...n' I see those, haven't seen in a while... My mother wavin' to me...with her pure white smile... Racial wars were never born, actually...they were resisted... n' poor wealth of one's self never even existed People aren't twisted, compliments you always hear... Try to picture a place with no abundance of fear The gates are near, that provide my protection... from things that could bring...destruction to perfection Silent paradise reigns....when my state is deep... Unbroken silence when i'm allowed to sleep... Perfection only exists in one's mind....That's why when I dream...Everythin' is perfect... Pz. God Bless. - T-West. |
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07-27-04, 03:16 PM
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IP: 19F7 7629
this was hot,
nice flow, great creativeness and nicely creating a picture in my head and easy to follow what the writter was trying to say and get at ya lines was above average and u stick the the point the whole time good job... 8.5 outta 10 keep droping them |
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07-27-04, 03:16 PM
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IP: 19F7 7629
hey can u also drop a feed back on my diss to forgotten flow pt2
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07-27-04, 03:17 PM
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IP: 19F7 7629
oo here is the link if u dont see it...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793 |
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07-27-04, 05:53 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4C49 64C6
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...451#post1441451
^I'de appreciate ur feedback on this This was nice. Quite a nice message & if im not mistaken are u meant to be in heaven? Thats what I got from this peace anyway....itd a nice take on that angle & another nice piece. |
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